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[Kaleidoscope revision] Colours | 4. Stripes

Jun 09, 2013 20:54

Chapter 4 of Colours (the first "book" of Kaleidoscope) has been revised and is now up at FanFiction.net.

Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
4. Stripes (2710 words | PG)
[also on FF.N] [ old LJ version]

Sirius discovers that Tonks is unaware of something rather important about Remus, so he takes matters into his own hands.

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revision, remus/tonks, kaleidoscope, stories

Comments 5

huldrejenta June 10 2013, 09:06:43 UTC

Oh, how I love your Remus and Tonks! And I must say, your Sirius as well. I just want to give them all a huge cup of tea and put a blanket over them and tell them everything's going to be fine:)

shimotsuki June 11 2013, 23:01:26 UTC

Aww, thanks! I think a cup of tea and a blanket sound like just the thing. :)

gilpin25 June 10 2013, 21:59:00 UTC

I have nothing useful to say, except that I started reading them again at the weekend, in order of course now, and had/am having a lovely time. Lots of memories in both the stories and when they were first written!

shimotsuki June 11 2013, 23:06:54 UTC

Aww, I'm glad you're enjoying! (Chapter 5 is already up on FFN, actually, but I missed posting this one here last week and didn't want to spam my own f-list with two at once...I'll post that one here in a day or so.)

It's been a lot of fun trying to think this through as a complete story unto itself, trying to work out what was missing to make it all hold together. (I'm sure I'm still missing lots, though, heh.)

I've been dying to tell someone, so I'll pick on you ;) -- but I actually had a new plotbunny the other day, for the first chapter in the HBP sequence! I've thought of a canon detail that I don't think I've ever seen any R/T writer make use of (and it's certainly hard to find those). Now if only work would calm down and give me more time to write important things like fanfic...

gilpin25 June 12 2013, 09:45:00 UTC

I've thought of a canon detail that I don't think I've ever seen any R/T writer make use of (and it's certainly hard to find those).

Ooh, you certainly know how to make me want to send you a doctor's note for some essential time off work! 'Stress caused to expectant reader by not being able to supply much-anticipated fic. Forbidden to work until completed to satisfaction of all concerned.' LOL. Seriously, I hope you do get some time soon, and you've got me wracking my brain what detail you're going to use! :)