[Kaleidoscope revision] Colours | 2. The Lie of the Land -- 3. Marauding for the Cause
Chapters 2 and 3 of Colours (the first "book" of Kaleidoscope) are now up at FanFiction.net. These chapters are some of the most recent I'd written, so not a lot got revised here -- in fact, there were so few changes that I just went in and made them on the original fic posts instead of reposting for the LJ version. The next two or three chapters coming up do have some revised scenes, and I've finally finished the first draft of a major rewrite with about 50% new material for the Remus-visits-Tonks-in-St. Mungo's sequence in chapter 10. But, boring this week. ;)
Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
2. The Lie of the Land (1605 words | PG)
[also on FF.N] [LJ version here]
Remus learns a few things about the newest Order member when he recruits her for a spot of pranking. It does occur to him to wonder what she might have learned, in turn.
[also on FF.N] [LJ version here]
An Order mission featuring Death Eaters, a banshee lamp, and high expectations all around.
Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
2. The Lie of the Land (1605 words | PG)
[also on FF.N] [LJ version here]
Remus learns a few things about the newest Order member when he recruits her for a spot of pranking. It does occur to him to wonder what she might have learned, in turn.
- What has changed: Stylistic revisions only.
[also on FF.N] [LJ version here]
An Order mission featuring Death Eaters, a banshee lamp, and high expectations all around.
- What has changed: Stylistic revisions only.