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FIC: Unwritten (Ned/Chuck)

Jan 07, 2009 19:44

Title: Unwritten
Author: shiiki
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Ned the Piemaker/Charlotte Charles (Chuck)
Fandom: Pushing Daisies
Word Count: 364

Summary: For arasnaem's prompt: Young Ned tries to write young Chuck a letter.

( At the Longborough School for Boys, Young Ned was often lonely. )

fic_character: [charlotte charles], fic_pairing: [ned/chuck], 2009!fic, fic_character: [ned the piemaker], fic_fandom: [pushing daisies], fic_length: [ficlet]

Comments 4

arasnaem January 7 2009, 16:32:23 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I love love LOVE it. You captured the narrator so well, I swear Jim Dale was reading it in my head. And the last line! *sniffle*

Wonderful! Thanks! =D=D

shiiki January 8 2009, 01:14:20 UTC

The narrator was pretty easy, actually - probably because I've watched this show too many times! The hard part was moving into Ned's thoughts and actions and describing them, because I could see it in my head, getting it down on paper in a believable way was a different matter!

But I'm so glad you like it.

That last line wasn't planned, but once it came out, I knew it had to stay.

latine January 7 2009, 21:21:01 UTC

Oh, Dawn, you truly are wonderful with characterisation!

shiiki January 8 2009, 01:14:59 UTC

*blushes* Thanks, dear. Writing this one was more of a trying-to-keep-in-style issue!