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FIC: The Hunt (James, Alice Cullen, OC, Gen)

Feb 03, 2008 15:40

Title: The Hunt
Author: shiiki
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: James, Alice Cullen, OC, Gen
Word Count: 2,299
Fandom: Twilight

Summary: James tracks one victim and remembers another.

Notes: Day 3 offering for February Frenzy! Un-beta-ed, nitpick at will. :)

( A jolt of surprise flashes through me when I set eyes on her. )

fic_character: [james], fic_pairing: [gen], 2008!fic, fic_length: [one-shot], fic_character: [alice cullen], fic_fandom: [twilight], fic_character: [oc]

Comments 4

vnfan February 3 2008, 11:37:02 UTC

ooooohhhh!!

You've given me chills! He's one nasty $#%$&% isn't he?

Great job of catching what his voice sounds like.

shiiki February 4 2008, 02:08:04 UTC

He is one seriously creepy character. I mean, hunting people for sport? I don't know what possessed me to write him, but somehow, digging into Alice's past evolved into ... this. Glad you thought it came out okay!

magentabear March 28 2009, 02:13:57 UTC

This is the very first piece of Twilight fanfic I've read. If the rest of it is this good.... well, damn, I'll have a new obsession.

I'm not really sure what parts of canon and what parts are you (I've only seen the movie, not read the books) but it's written so freaking well I don't care. It's creepy, in a good way of course. Love it.

shiiki March 28 2009, 12:00:27 UTC

Aw ... *blushes madly*

This is based solely on book canon (I wrote this before the movie came out ... and anyway I generally tend to follow book canon), but my 'additions' are mostly details and fleshing out of some loosely described scenes (James's canon description of his discovery of Alice and her 'maker', whose name I also made up). I'm glad you like it! James certainly is a creepy character.

If you're looking for other quality Twilight fic, may I point you in willow_wand and vnfan's direction? There's also for_forks_sake, which is a great place for high-quality discussion. :)