[APH Fic] Bell'Italiano [1/3] [US/UK]

Mar 08, 2011 14:06

Title: Bell'Italiano
Genre: Romance/Fluff, stupidity (is that a genre?)
Pairing(s): America and England
Rating: I say M for sexytimes.
Warnings: Poor Italian skills, Arthur being stupid and flirty, America being dumb, oh and sex
Summary: England is still dressed up as an Italian, and an oblivious America runs into him and doesn't realize who he is. Cue ( Read more... )

france, america, china, rating: r, pairing: usukus, england, kink meme

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chiisana00 March 8 2011, 20:28:02 UTC
It's a nice fic.

Although all the while I can't stop thinking about the angst side that could possibly be resident in England, like;

"America is behaving like this because of Arturo. It's me yet it's someone else, and America will never act like this with (the real) me (England)."

Yeah, shoot me for the stupid angst >w>;;;

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shibbyone March 8 2011, 20:31:02 UTC
Hahahahahahahahaha don't worry about it. I had trouble with that too, normally I'd delve into all that and this fic would be a lot more complex but it was for the kink meme so I kept it nice and sweet hahaha. But no, there are lots of potential issues, I totes agree. I tried to make it so that America was attracted to England, and England was just being more forward than normal, considering America figured it out right away, but now I'm babbling XD <3

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chiisana00 March 8 2011, 20:43:59 UTC
Pssss~ Could make a sequel ;D

-RUNS-

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j_sasunaru_c March 8 2011, 20:43:23 UTC
Like woah! Goodness England, you know America's really, really not stupid like that, I knew it!

I'm so happy, ahahah! But I am so freaking, honestly confused as to who topped OMG I'm sorry. stupid reader is stupid

Hahahah, still, lovely fill!

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j_sasunaru_c March 8 2011, 20:46:05 UTC
I also noticed the angst lurking in England's mind!

LOVES ANGST LIKE NOTHING ELSE MATTERS

It would be nice to explore it, and oohh, England broke my heart again!

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shibbyone March 8 2011, 21:01:24 UTC
YOUR ENTHUSIASM MAKES ME HAPPY AND REMINDS ME OF ME

Thankies :D

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shibbyone March 8 2011, 21:02:26 UTC
TBH I'm not sure who topped either, I think England? That was from me being indecisive. I mean... what.

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gloomykuma March 9 2011, 02:21:33 UTC
OH GOD. I loved this so much.

Obfuscating stupidity, England! XD

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shibbyone March 9 2011, 16:15:36 UTC
Hahahaha I'm glad you enjoyed it! I enjoyed writing it and yes-- oh, England.

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closeincline March 9 2011, 03:40:00 UTC
this was so adorable, oh my god, I seriously wish there was more of it!! thanks for posting.

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shibbyone March 9 2011, 16:16:37 UTC
Awwe thanks! I'm thinking of writing another part, where America finds England the next day and he's not in disguise and neither knows the other knows who they really are... potential for awkward is far too great

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closeincline March 9 2011, 19:35:38 UTC
I look forward to the awkward with baited breath then ^_^

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lost_hitsu March 9 2011, 05:45:08 UTC
I commented on the kinkmeme but I have to do so again - this was unusual and surprisingly deep, considering the slightly cracky prompt. I have it bookmarked and I'm happy you de-anoned!

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shibbyone March 9 2011, 16:19:00 UTC
Yay thank you! I'm happy too, now more people can enjoy the zany!!

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