in da' club on a thursday morning.

Sep 29, 2005 23:41

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goitershappen September 30 2005, 16:35:25 UTC
damn boooyeee, your flow is so fresh!

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am i blue pearls_aside October 3 2005, 22:36:40 UTC
don't know how you feel about formed poetry--for some reason i'm guessing you will have some rant or reason about why you don't--but this sounds like you could really work it with the villanelle form, with all your repetition of the words "bones" and "stones," which already has its own music too it as it is.

snaps.

after two stellar entries, you can't tell me a general morose does not breed good writing.

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Re: am i blue shey_shaw October 4 2005, 01:07:17 UTC
fuck good writing... it isn't worth it.

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Re: am i blue pearls_aside October 4 2005, 03:46:51 UTC
it is after your indelibly finite misery passes and you are left with something timeless, indestructible.

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Re: am i blue shey_shaw October 4 2005, 05:36:15 UTC
damn your reason. let my childish apathy reign supreme!

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