unsharpened pencils

[shewalksbut0see]

the spirit weighed
d
  o
w
  n
as the blue crushes all things
unresiliant.
pushed on this side
      yanked upright 
on the other
oh
that i were not underwater
my heart is, weakly, growing
(pressure's mounting)

heavy.

Comments

[ginni_tamez]

this is my favorite.

e.e. cummings-esque (I love e.e. cummings!). beautiful. deep. evocative. should I go on?

I love you.

[shewalksbut0see]

thanks : )

i love him too...i have actually been studying his stuff recently...