Fic (repost): Depth of Need (SGA, Sheppard/McKay, NC-17) 1/1

[shetiger]

I've been revealed over on stargateanon, so I'm going to repost here. Thank you to everyone who read when it was over there

Comments

[mmmchelle]

I loved this. It was the perfect twist on AMTDI.

But the observations about Ronon and Teyla being like kids; Rodney ignoring sarcasm; John's reasons for provoking Rodney, were what made the fic for me.

Wonderful fic, hon.

[shetiger]

Yay, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[ctorres]

Hee. This is great.

[shetiger]

Thanks!

[flaming_muse]

I started out expecting a very serious story, but instead I found this delightfully funny one! I read much of it with a smile on my face; you caught the characters' worries while also keeping the tone light. What a treat!

This line was my favorite: Teyla shook her head. "They seemed no different than usual." Her eyebrow rose with her rueful
smile. "Not that I have not been tempted to separate them at times for other reasons." I can totally hear her saying that!

[shetiger]

Oh, yay! The tone of the story gave me a lot of trouble. I knew the story exactly from the moment I thought of it, but I didn't know whether to write it straight-out serious or to go completely cracky. So I wound up somewhere in the middle. I'm glad it worked.

Thanks. :)

[raven_lore]

This is great and thanks to it I now have a big, silly smile on my face. I love that they are so messed up by the Pegasus galaxy that they suspect even their natural reactions.

And every character was perfect and funny.

[shetiger]

Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

[theniwokesoftly]

Fabulous ending!!! To a very hot and funny fic. I am a happy girl.

[shetiger]

Thank you!