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Ugh! Painting teacher wants me to think about the next project and sketch it out. (I kinda have an idea already but I also need to come up with some other ones... I have other ideas too... not planning to do as many sketches though as I did with the past project, or I might pick another one from my past project... *shrugs*
Need to finish up last painting... and now that I've done the dunes, its not so hard. I'll be done before Yah knowit.
Then I also need to clarify my plot... of Blackout... In one sentence. This is what I need help with.
I could have maybe done it 3 years ago when I started but now that sooo much as happened and changed that I can't really define it correctly. I'm not sure that because its a 3 part book that it had three different plots, though that sounds stupid. Because nothing changes from each part.
I know the plot is supposed to say, MC, and what he wants to achieve or something, the enemy or obstical hindering him, and what makes it unique.
And I can name that shit no probs, but i suck at putting it into a sentence.
The main character is Zephyros who wants to escape his world in order to find another world and preserve it's 'happiness'. And this has probably got something to do with his Character, he's upset with his inner self and puts out his outter self to seem strong and is unwilling to help himself.
The enemy or obstical is Eon, and various other enemies that fight against the UBO (his organization) in order to maintain the universe's chaotic nature.
What makes the story unique is the fact that there are a bunch of secrets hiding the turth and the fact that everything thats been happening has been predeterminded by Eon and Elle (mainly).
So how to do I take this info and make it into a one lined plot?
This is what I came up with:
Super optimist Zephyros Wilder takes the fate that's dealt to him to create an organization in order to preserve Universal Peace.
But I feel like its lacking. Do you get the plot idea from that?
Need to finish up last painting... and now that I've done the dunes, its not so hard. I'll be done before Yah knowit.
Then I also need to clarify my plot... of Blackout... In one sentence. This is what I need help with.
I could have maybe done it 3 years ago when I started but now that sooo much as happened and changed that I can't really define it correctly. I'm not sure that because its a 3 part book that it had three different plots, though that sounds stupid. Because nothing changes from each part.
I know the plot is supposed to say, MC, and what he wants to achieve or something, the enemy or obstical hindering him, and what makes it unique.
And I can name that shit no probs, but i suck at putting it into a sentence.
The main character is Zephyros who wants to escape his world in order to find another world and preserve it's 'happiness'. And this has probably got something to do with his Character, he's upset with his inner self and puts out his outter self to seem strong and is unwilling to help himself.
The enemy or obstical is Eon, and various other enemies that fight against the UBO (his organization) in order to maintain the universe's chaotic nature.
What makes the story unique is the fact that there are a bunch of secrets hiding the turth and the fact that everything thats been happening has been predeterminded by Eon and Elle (mainly).
So how to do I take this info and make it into a one lined plot?
This is what I came up with:
Super optimist Zephyros Wilder takes the fate that's dealt to him to create an organization in order to preserve Universal Peace.
But I feel like its lacking. Do you get the plot idea from that?