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Jul 14, 2004 13:55

I couldn't sleep last night and I wrote this in my paper journal, so I thought I'd share it with you guys since usually my late night ramblings are on here. Keep in mind this post isn't about her, or him it's just there.

insomnia )

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littlemissplanb July 14 2004, 11:24:49 UTC
Main Entry: in·som·nia = JANET

i love reading what you write. your detail allows me to visualize things so well, almost as if i were there.

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bumpystik July 14 2004, 11:30:49 UTC
I agree, it's amazing how she can do that

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sheslikemercury July 14 2004, 12:37:05 UTC
thank you ma'am.

it's easy to be descriptive once you know how. my creative writing teacher taught me to make a statement describing something, and then force myself to come up with 2 or 3 other ways to say the same thing, but using different words. doing that forces you to use better descriptions because each time you're racking your brain for something you haven't said, that better describes what you're talking about.

it works!

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freakyjen July 14 2004, 17:11:50 UTC
i thought you were there in her bed with her...

oh wait a minute.. i think that was in that dream i had....

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calientepollo July 14 2004, 12:03:43 UTC
I guess I'm dumb,I can never understand it.Can I have that in retard terms please? I need to remember to get my decoder back.

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sheslikemercury July 14 2004, 12:37:45 UTC
you're not dumb, you just arent a fruit loopy girl

see you soon. ;)

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charlotteb July 14 2004, 18:43:21 UTC
You really are a wonderful writer...everything always flows together so nicely. Its nice and refreshing to read stuff from you. Thanks.

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sheslikemercury July 14 2004, 21:01:39 UTC
thank you ma'am.

i just sit down and spill things, and hope that on occasion they are somewhat coherent

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charlotteb July 15 2004, 05:36:33 UTC
I think the majority of the time that they are definitely coherent.

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