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Howl - 2/2 (Merlin - PG-13)

Jul 12, 2010 00:06

Title: Howl
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 11,504!
Spoilers/Warnings: The same sort of violence you see on the show! Post-Season 2, spoilers for The Last Dragon Lord.
Author's Notes: Thanks to my beta, mpoetess and halfnorn for not telling me to shut up when I was writing it.

From here...

( Now there's no holding back. I'm waiting to attack )

fanfic: merlin

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shadecat July 12 2010, 06:34:42 UTC

It let them see more of the village and surrounding areasn Arthur had insisted, giving Merlin an annoyed look until he hauled himself up there.

Not sure if you meant 'area' or 'areas'... Or 'Arthur's hot leather-clad arse'..
I'd prefer the last :D

"Dont be such a girl, Merlin. It's only four of them,"

You forgot a '.

*Might I add that I'm SO sorry I'm picking at your story. I really really do love it.*

"What's wro--" Merlin started to ask, following his gave over thattaway.

gaze?

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AHAHAH! I loved this. Really. Great reveal. LOVE the banter. I love banter like I love the air. And the fact that Arthur's a little besotted. *snort*
Perfect.
Also, it's completely understandable that Merlin can't stop looking at his arse. If faced with an arse like that, I think I'd be more than a little distracted.
REALLY well done :)

chrisastopholis July 12 2010, 21:32:15 UTC

I just have to say, I absolutely love your icon. It made me spit out my drink when I first read it.

shadecat July 12 2010, 21:48:26 UTC

I love my icons. They're full of ♥

And that one is SO TRUE!

shesakicker July 12 2010, 22:44:38 UTC

Fixed now that I am back from work and there is no danger of the dog widdling on the carpet.

And yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

shadecat July 12 2010, 22:46:32 UTC

NO! NOT DOG WEE!! *runs in fear*

I really really did. I thought the dialogue was brilliant and the descriptions were dead-on. Also, flaily Merlin is kind of effing adorable.

There were WAY too many lines I wanted to point out, so I didn't. Cuz it was pretty much all gold. GOLD!

shesakicker July 12 2010, 22:50:43 UTC

It's the dangers of allowing your writing style to be influenced by Terry Pratchett. Who I recommend everyone and their mom read because he'd made of win.

shadecat July 12 2010, 22:58:25 UTC

It's better than having it influenced by Stephanie Meyer or Laurell K Hamilton.

Not that I'm knocking them yes I am, but.. well.. one has not enough sex and their copious drug abuse is cough syrup and the other has degraded into strangely pieced together porn.

:/

Lackey? Cook? Asminov?... WHERE ARE THEY!!?

shesakicker July 12 2010, 23:02:10 UTC

*SNERK*

Oh man, I actually have a LKH book autographed by her. In my defense, I was young and naive at the time. And she was slightly less crazy in her first... three books.

Go check out the TV Tropes of Anita Blake. HILARITY.

shadecat July 12 2010, 23:13:44 UTC

Dude, I have all her AB series. AND MG... what can I say? I figure I CAN bitch because I read it... yeah.

I kind of prefer the MG series cuz the main char isn't as much of a whiny prude about the fact that she's banging multiple hot guys.

And the books went to hell after Obsidian Butterfly. They were OKAY after the fourth one - but they DIED after OB. *hangs head* Rest in Peace, Anita.

OMG there are TV Tropes? NOOOOOOOOOOO! *falls to knees*

P.S., love ur icon.

shesakicker July 12 2010, 23:17:11 UTC

I SEE YOU THERE, COMIC-BOOK ANITA ICON.

And yeah, at least in MG, she's just going for porn with a sprinkling of plot. It's not about Merry's epic quest to be normal while amassing a harem of men who may or may not be willing.

(I MAY COLLECT RANDOM ICONS)

shadecat July 12 2010, 23:24:28 UTC

I LOVE RANDOM ICONS!!!

I may have to go through yours and steal them all.
ALL OF THEM! *cackles*

shesakicker July 12 2010, 23:26:58 UTC

R2! Damn it, now I have to do the same with yours. This is a vicious cycle.

shadecat July 12 2010, 23:35:04 UTC

BITCHSMACK!PIKACHU!!

The cycle continues.. *plays japanese flute music*

shesakicker July 12 2010, 23:36:20 UTC

The next Miyazaki movie is about this. And dragons. This and dragons.

shadecat July 12 2010, 23:43:44 UTC

And the tears of small children...

shesakicker July 12 2010, 23:47:01 UTC

I would like to see that movie now. Not gonna lie. It would be epic and only possible in Japan.

Where anything goes.

Following suit with Supernatural and Gossip Girl, a Merlin manga/anime must surely be next. Where Merlin has giant anime eyes and cries a lot and Arthur is constantly surrounded by sakura blossoms..

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