Comments | sheryden: Fic: Detained (Leverage/Stargate: SG-1 crossover, PG)

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Fic: Detained (Leverage/Stargate: SG-1 crossover, PG)

Oct 17, 2010 01:56

Title: Detained
Author: sheryden
Fandoms: Leverage/Stargate: SG-1
Rating: PG
Characters: The Leverage team; Jack O'Neill, Vala Mal Doran, Daniel Jackson, Cam Mitchell, and Walter Harriman
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1734
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Neither belong to me. Which is actually kind of sad.
Summary: During a routine job, the Leverage team is ( Read more... )

fic: stargate: sg-1, eliot gets his own tag, fic: leverage

Comments 34

lerah99 October 17 2010, 06:30:40 UTC

I love the blending of these two worlds!
Your Vala is fantastic! I love it when she asks what Eliot's snake's name was. Oh, and when she calls Daniel a grave robber!
Also, brillant move by Eliot telling Hardison the truth. Of course Hardison wouldn't believe it.

Thank you for writing and posting this.

sheryden October 18 2010, 01:40:57 UTC

Thanks! :D

shanachie_quill October 17 2010, 13:22:28 UTC

Oh I like this! Kewl idea that Eliot was once Goa'ulded. And involved with the SGC. That would be a cool backstory :-)

You've got the character voices spot on and did a good job here. Great work!

sheryden October 18 2010, 01:42:02 UTC

Thanks! I've been trying to get other people to write a fic where Eliot had been a Goa'uld. No one ever took me up on it, so I just figured I'd give it a shot!

shanachie_quill October 18 2010, 02:08:02 UTC

Haha yeah sometimes it just works better to write it yourself. Oh wait...that's how I end up writing 3/4 of the stuff I do.

nonniemous October 17 2010, 13:31:52 UTC

Jack and Eliot! What an awesome combo--and I love the paternal feel to things. "I keep an eye on Eliot." Indeed. Someone needs to!

Daniel's discomfiture with Vala's "grave-robbing" was awesome, and of course she'd bond with Sophie and Parker. They should all go out for tea. And of course now you know you have to write the "Eliot got G'oaulded" story. You must!

sheryden October 18 2010, 01:43:45 UTC

Thanks! I might have to do the "Eliot got Goa'ulded" fic eventually. :D

menomegirl October 17 2010, 14:56:50 UTC

I love this!!!

sheryden October 18 2010, 01:43:52 UTC

Thanks! :D

scout_lover October 17 2010, 15:11:12 UTC

I love this! All he character voices are spot-on, and I could see and hear everything so clearly. I particularly love the Jack and Eliot interaction. As someone above noted, it has a lovely paternal air to it.

So, yes, you must write Eliot got G'oaulded.

And how much do I want to read a Parker-Vala fic now? With Eliot along for damage control and snark? *g*

sheryden October 18 2010, 01:44:39 UTC

Thanks! :D

Parker and Vala would be so much fun together!