Re: Anyone interested in giving crit to a Moriarty/Moran fic? tw: spanking, daddy kink (3/?)
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August 31 2012, 18:13:14 UTC
Sebastian’s hands continued to punish Jim. Every blow felt harder than the previous one as his skin got more abused and every blow made his cock brush on the fabric of Sebastian’s trousers, making him squirm a little with his mouth hanging open on arousal as he moaned another number. His body felt trapped between pain and pleasure, mixing up all the signals that had to do with both stimuli, mingling into an indescribable feeling in his gut and all he knew was that he wanted more, to feel more of his skin on fire and alive. Whenever Jim felt he couldn’t take any longer, the hands would stroke his bottom, relieving the pain a little bit before they continued punishing him until he couldn’t distinguish pleasure from pain anymore. When Sebastian’s hands finally came to a stop, his skin felt oversensitive and on fire, like every little touch had tenfold of its pressure. His arse looked reddish-pink all over and Jim stifled a sniff, huffed breathing, red cheeks and eyes watery, arousal at his peak between his legs. “Daddy…” he looked up and blinked, a small tear escaping from the corner of his big eyes.
“Shhh… You did well. You are such a good boy, Jim.” Sebastian wiped the salty tear from his boyish face and sat him up carefully on his lap. Jim winced and stifled a whine at the contact of his abused skin with the rough denim fabric. It burnt and it hurt. His arms encircled Sebastian’s neck and he nuzzled on his shoulder, resting his head there.
“Don’t worry, it’s all over now.” Sebastian’s hands rested on his upper thighs, caressing the flesh beneath his fingers in a soothing manner, making Jim relax content against him. “Did you learn your lesson?”
“Yes, Daddy. I promise I’ll never touch it again without your permission.” Jim reassured him in a small carefully toned down voice, nuzzling more against the neck in front of him when Sebastian’s hands travelled along his body, sliding along his back.
“Are you ready for your reward now?” Jim gave an enthusiastic nod and Sebastian’s hands gripped on his sides, pulling him away from his body a little. He planted a soft kiss on Jim’s temple before finding his lips with his.
Jim mewled at the touch of Sebastian’s mouth on his, hungrily lapping at his lips as his hands clutched on the back of Sebastian’s t-shirt. “More, Daddy, please” Jim pleaded with a needy voice and he choked back a sob when Sebastian’s hands fisted his forgotten erection between his thighs, shivering and buckling his hips at the sensation.
“Oh Daddy” Jim closed his eyes lost in sensation. He moaned when Sebastian nipped at his lower lip, sucking on the tender flesh before nibbling between his teeth, making it redder.
“You cry so beautifully, Jim.” Sebastian spoke into his mouth before kissing him again, this time more fiercely and Jim hugged him by his neck as he fretted against the fist encircling him. It felt like madness and madness suited Jim, he could feel himself losing control to the sensations of Sebastian’s hands deliciously entrapping him in tight heat. Every shift of his hips only sent more sparks of intense feeling along his body and made his mind spiral downwards.
Jim stopped his hips with a painful gasp and parted away from the kiss, hands clutching Sebastian’s shoulders. His movements were making the friction between his red arse cheeks and the other man’s trousers unbearable now. He squeezed his eyes shut and felt Sebastian’s lips trying to kiss him better all over his face but Jim would never stop being greedy.
“Why don’t you let Daddy do all the work, hm?” Sebastian murmured before biting on his earlobe.
Jim nodded and relaxed against his strong body, letting his hands take care of him. Sebastian’s mouth latched onto his neck, leaving a trail of bruising kisses behind, marking him as he resumed his jerking on Jim’s cock. It leaked and twitched sensitive at every lingering caress on other parts of Jim’s body and making the contact of Sebastian’s expert hand even more pleasurable. Sebastian’s other hand brushed Jim’s shirt away and found a nipple, tweaking it with his thumb and forefinger. Jim yelped, more cries coming out of his mouth as time went by, his thighs trembled and sweat began to break onto his forehead.
“Shhh… You did well. You are such a good boy, Jim.” Sebastian wiped the salty tear from his boyish face and sat him up carefully on his lap. Jim winced and stifled a whine at the contact of his abused skin with the rough denim fabric. It burnt and it hurt. His arms encircled Sebastian’s neck and he nuzzled on his shoulder, resting his head there.
“Don’t worry, it’s all over now.” Sebastian’s hands rested on his upper thighs, caressing the flesh beneath his fingers in a soothing manner, making Jim relax content against him. “Did you learn your lesson?”
“Yes, Daddy. I promise I’ll never touch it again without your permission.” Jim reassured him in a small carefully toned down voice, nuzzling more against the neck in front of him when Sebastian’s hands travelled along his body, sliding along his back.
“Are you ready for your reward now?” Jim gave an enthusiastic nod and Sebastian’s hands gripped on his sides, pulling him away from his body a little. He planted a soft kiss on Jim’s temple before finding his lips with his.
Jim mewled at the touch of Sebastian’s mouth on his, hungrily lapping at his lips as his hands clutched on the back of Sebastian’s t-shirt. “More, Daddy, please” Jim pleaded with a needy voice and he choked back a sob when Sebastian’s hands fisted his forgotten erection between his thighs, shivering and buckling his hips at the sensation.
“Oh Daddy” Jim closed his eyes lost in sensation. He moaned when Sebastian nipped at his lower lip, sucking on the tender flesh before nibbling between his teeth, making it redder.
“You cry so beautifully, Jim.” Sebastian spoke into his mouth before kissing him again, this time more fiercely and Jim hugged him by his neck as he fretted against the fist encircling him. It felt like madness and madness suited Jim, he could feel himself losing control to the sensations of Sebastian’s hands deliciously entrapping him in tight heat. Every shift of his hips only sent more sparks of intense feeling along his body and made his mind spiral downwards.
Jim stopped his hips with a painful gasp and parted away from the kiss, hands clutching Sebastian’s shoulders. His movements were making the friction between his red arse cheeks and the other man’s trousers unbearable now. He squeezed his eyes shut and felt Sebastian’s lips trying to kiss him better all over his face but Jim would never stop being greedy.
“Why don’t you let Daddy do all the work, hm?” Sebastian murmured before biting on his earlobe.
Jim nodded and relaxed against his strong body, letting his hands take care of him. Sebastian’s mouth latched onto his neck, leaving a trail of bruising kisses behind, marking him as he resumed his jerking on Jim’s cock. It leaked and twitched sensitive at every lingering caress on other parts of Jim’s body and making the contact of Sebastian’s expert hand even more pleasurable. Sebastian’s other hand brushed Jim’s shirt away and found a nipple, tweaking it with his thumb and forefinger. Jim yelped, more cries coming out of his mouth as time went by, his thighs trembled and sweat began to break onto his forehead.
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