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5+1 anonymous August 21 2011, 03:02:25 UTC
Five times John watched someone walking away from him, and one time he knew someone will never let him go.
S/J prefered :)

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Re: 5+1 anonymous August 21 2011, 15:59:58 UTC
Seconding! This is a sweet prompt :)

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 1 emma_elicit August 21 2011, 17:12:50 UTC
"Harry? What are you doing here ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 1 anonymous August 21 2011, 17:45:48 UTC
I like that you’ve set this in John's present, and not in his past - I definitely didn’t expect that based on the prompt, very original. I’m looking forward to finding out who else walks away from John. And who doesn’t.

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 1 anonymous August 21 2011, 17:51:18 UTC
Aaaand you've posted more while I was reading. That's the second time in as many days that happens to me. I blame LJ for hiding new comments when I refresh :/

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 2/a WARNINGS: NC-17, dubcon emma_elicit August 21 2011, 17:33:05 UTC
The first time John has a sexual encounter with a man is at uni ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 2/b WARNINGS: NC-17, dubcon emma_elicit August 21 2011, 17:34:05 UTC
"Mmm yeah take it... oh you've got a sweet mouth, John... yes you do..." Arthur whispers as tears run down John's face. When John tries to move away, Arthur wrenches his head back down savagely, hissing, "You asked for this, rutting against me on your door - you asked for this to happen you slut!" John's disagreements are lost around Arthur's cock, which is trying to find its way down John's throat. John gags viciously, but Arthur keeps fucking, only telling him to relax his damn throat ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 2/b WARNINGS: NC-17, dubcon pockyhorrors August 21 2011, 17:56:31 UTC
Jesus, Arthur is such a colossal dickweed, but I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this unfolds!

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 2/b WARNINGS: NC-17, dubcon anonymous August 21 2011, 18:11:27 UTC
Another clever interpretation, having the person walking away from John be someone who's not important for what he means to John, but for what he did to John.

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 3 emma_elicit August 21 2011, 18:41:06 UTC
The first time John goes out to a crime scene with Sherlock, he runs into a rather familiar face - Detective Inspector Greg Lestrade. Either the older man doesn't remember his conversation with John, or doesn't want to - either way, he avoids John's eyes and John can't help feeling a little smug ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 3 vash137 August 22 2011, 03:36:52 UTC
Really enjoying this fill! Especially love how you are using OCs and cannon characters in original ways! Keep going with this!

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 4 emma_elicit August 22 2011, 03:49:58 UTC
After the Black Lotus incident, John asks Sarah on another date. She accepts and Sherlock is conspicuously absent (John may or may not have begged Mycroft to fin a way to distract Sherlock for the evening). John does not take her to Angelo's - a part of him rebels at the very thought of taking her to his and Sherlock's place. (He tries not to think about why that part yells so loudly.) Instead, they go to a small French cafe and trade stories about their patients at the surgery over croissants. Meaningful looks begin over their second cup of coffee, and when John invites her to the flat for a nightcap, she happily accepts ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 4 anonymous August 22 2011, 04:10:08 UTC
Oh man, poor John, for such an awkward situation. Really enjoying this.

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 5 emma_elicit August 22 2011, 17:57:28 UTC
“John ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 6/a emma_elicit August 22 2011, 21:36:56 UTC
Snow is falling gently past the windows of 221B Baker Street. John has laid a fire in the grate, and it’s crackling merrily. He’s sitting cross-legged in front of it, contemplating deep thoughts ( ... )

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Re: 5+1 Chapter 6/b emma_elicit August 22 2011, 21:38:01 UTC
Sherlock blinks. “I beg your pardon ( ... )

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