Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)
anonymous
March 8 2011, 00:47:17 UTC
(WARNING: gory murder description)
"I take it your day was as long and soul-destroying as mine, then?"
Lestrade looked up to find Mycroft offering him some tissues and a glass of water. He took the water, drained it in one and then started cleaning himself up. "Yeah. Young mum. Her dealer boyfriend sliced her up and left her body in the flat with her two year old kid. Hopefully the kid's too young to remember any of it but even so..."
Mycroft stood behind him and started massaging Lestrade's shoulder muscles. "No wonder you're so tense. I still don't quite understand why you find this scenario such a relief but you indulge my preferences so it is only fair I reciprocate."
"You whip my back, I'll come all over yours?" Lestrade chuckled.
"Something of that ilk."
Lestrade got to his feet. "Can I have my shirt back now?"
"Certainly not! I meant every word I said about that grotesque garment. I will have some new shirts delivered to you."
"My, there's no point me wearing expensive shirts. Not in my job."
"I believe I can provide you with in-expensive shirts that are still of reasonable quality. There is a great difference between inexpensive and cheap."
"Oh? And which am I?"
Mycroft opened a drawer in his desk and took out a small black box. "You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price." He handed the box to Lestrade.
Lestrade opened it. Inside was a beautiful watch, clearly expensive but very tastefully understated. He lifted it out and read the inscription on the back.
GL
My time is always yours.
MH
Lestrade felt himself choking up. "My... I can't take this... It's far too much."
"Nonsense - and before you fret, I will also have a more inexpensive model delivered to you for your day to day work."
Lestrade continued to just hold the watch and stare at it.
Mycroft took Lestrade's free hand in his. "Please accept it, Gregory. It comes with no obligation but I desperately wanted to give you something as a token of the very deep affection I hold you in. I want to see you wearing that when we play this game so I know you know my true feelings for you. I find it... quite hard to say some of the things I know you enjoy hearing."
"I've never once doubted you - but thank you for telling me you feel that. It should never be solely about what I want. And thank you for the watch. I'll treasure it." Lestrade slipped the watch onto his wrist and gave Mycroft a slow gentle kiss. "But I'm still not walking out of here without a shirt..."
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)
anonymous
March 10 2011, 06:19:56 UTC
I'm reading this for the second time. This is so hot and sweet. Your character voices are really good. I can imagine Mycroft saying that dialogue so well.
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)
anonymous
March 13 2011, 23:07:41 UTC
Thanks for the comment! Humiliation!kink's a funny one if it's something your partner enjoys that you just don't get - I was really glad the OP asked for the after-fluff...
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)bwblackMarch 11 2011, 21:24:18 UTC
That was great. I especially like Mycroft making him remove his belt after the whole collar/leash exchange and great bit of humor with the shirt. Some porn, some plot. Good stuff!
Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 13 2011, 21:14:47 UTC
I ♥ YOU! You wrote everything I wanted and you made even better than I imagined!
Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price." I want to see you wearing that when we play this game so I know you know my true feelings for you. I find it... quite hard to say some of the things I know you enjoy hearing."
You get a million bonus points for the aftermath, the minute the scene was over you could feel all the caring between them.
Now I'm curious about Mycroft's preferences...Sequel anytime? Thanks again :D
"I take it your day was as long and soul-destroying as mine, then?"
Lestrade looked up to find Mycroft offering him some tissues and a glass of water. He took the water, drained it in one and then started cleaning himself up. "Yeah. Young mum. Her dealer boyfriend sliced her up and left her body in the flat with her two year old kid. Hopefully the kid's too young to remember any of it but even so..."
Mycroft stood behind him and started massaging Lestrade's shoulder muscles. "No wonder you're so tense. I still don't quite understand why you find this scenario such a relief but you indulge my preferences so it is only fair I reciprocate."
"You whip my back, I'll come all over yours?" Lestrade chuckled.
"Something of that ilk."
Lestrade got to his feet. "Can I have my shirt back now?"
"Certainly not! I meant every word I said about that grotesque garment. I will have some new shirts delivered to you."
"My, there's no point me wearing expensive shirts. Not in my job."
"I believe I can provide you with in-expensive shirts that are still of reasonable quality. There is a great difference between inexpensive and cheap."
"Oh? And which am I?"
Mycroft opened a drawer in his desk and took out a small black box. "You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price." He handed the box to Lestrade.
Lestrade opened it. Inside was a beautiful watch, clearly expensive but very tastefully understated. He lifted it out and read the inscription on the back.
GL
My time is always yours.
MH
Lestrade felt himself choking up. "My... I can't take this... It's far too much."
"Nonsense - and before you fret, I will also have a more inexpensive model delivered to you for your day to day work."
Lestrade continued to just hold the watch and stare at it.
Mycroft took Lestrade's free hand in his. "Please accept it, Gregory. It comes with no obligation but I desperately wanted to give you something as a token of the very deep affection I hold you in. I want to see you wearing that when we play this game so I know you know my true feelings for you. I find it... quite hard to say some of the things I know you enjoy hearing."
"I've never once doubted you - but thank you for telling me you feel that. It should never be solely about what I want. And thank you for the watch. I'll treasure it." Lestrade slipped the watch onto his wrist and gave Mycroft a slow gentle kiss. "But I'm still not walking out of here without a shirt..."
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Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price."
I want to see you wearing that when we play this game so I know you know my true feelings for you. I find it... quite hard to say some of the things I know you enjoy hearing."
You get a million bonus points for the aftermath, the minute the scene was over you could feel all the caring between them.
Now I'm curious about Mycroft's preferences...Sequel anytime? Thanks again :D
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