Welcome! (Prompting: part i)

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This is a fic prompting meme based around the BBC series Sherlock, written by Stephen Moffat & Mark Gattis.

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Minifill tatyan85 August 19 2010, 20:01:30 UTC
Minifill!^^ Sorry, deserved better :(

-Oh dear Go...-

For some reason, that was what Lastrade would always remember of the whole fact. Not that Mary, that petite and cute little blonde, barely of legal age, had almost killed John. Not the sight of her bowels leaking over the street after Sherlock Holmes had leaped to kill her. Not even the frantic struggle to restrain a consulting detective gone mad avoding the little but effective pocket knife he was holding. No. What he remembered mostly was Donovan voice, barely restrained, and her hand pressing her mounth while she looked, wide-eyed, at Sherlock Holmes' face.
He himself avoided to look at it. He wasn't sure he would like what he was certain he would see.
Hovewer, lately, after a man he had been carefully istructed to forgot had taken away a still murdeous Sherlock (and he *really* didn't want to think about it, superior orders or not. Sherlock reaction had been... terrifing, but worse still was the bland nonchalance of the other not-existing man in taking the young consulting detective away)... hovewer, while he learnt that the Doctor would live and that Sherlock had failed to become a murder even this time (thanks to modern medicine not of lack of will. Modern medicine and brotherly concern and he really didn't need order not to think about that) hovewer, drinking is mud-tasting coffee, and really all the automatic-machine had the same fould liquid inside...
Hovewer, the cause had been sufficient.
He would write that, in his rapport.

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Re: Minifill tatyan85 August 19 2010, 20:38:10 UTC
Dear God in Heaven, I will have a firstborn just so I can give it to you if only you could eventually expand on this, because this is excatly what I had in mind (I'm the original prompter, btw).

In any case, well done.

Not the sight of her bowels leaking over the street after Sherlock Holmes had leaped to kill her. Not even the frantic struggle to restrain a consulting detective gone mad avoding the little but effective pocket knife he was holding. No. What he remembered mostly was Donovan voice, barely restrained, and her hand pressing her mounth while she looked, wide-eyed, at Sherlock Holmes' face.
He himself avoided to look at it. He wasn't sure he would like what he was certain he would see.

<3 <3 <3 :D :D :D

THIS. JUST THIS.

Really, if firstborns are not your currency of choice I'm sure we can come to an agreement about something else.

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Re: Minifill tatyan85 August 19 2010, 20:52:06 UTC
^__^ I am very glad you liked this :D the only problem with expanding (and really, writing any kind of longer fiction) is that I am Italian and I don't have a beta :(

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Re: Minifill alkja August 19 2010, 20:52:34 UTC
Firstborns aside, I completely agree with the anon prompter: this was awesome!

For some strange reason, Donovan being discombobulated at that sight instead of going "I was right!" really gives you the sense of barely averted carnage. Not to mention older and wiser Lestrade refusing to look.

Sure you want to leave it at this? It has great potential!

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Re: Minifill tatyan85 August 19 2010, 21:03:52 UTC
you are all very kind!^_^
I don't have a beta :( you can see the loads and loads of error I made here (Sherlock would have killed me XD)

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Re: Minifill goddam_ninja August 20 2010, 00:24:00 UTC
I don't really know how the whole beta thing works, really. But, if it's grammar/spelling stuff you're worried about, I would be more then happy to beta for you.
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...(yeah. I really want a sequel. Or prequel. Or anything at all, really. Please?)

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Re: Minifill tatyan85 August 20 2010, 08:22:37 UTC
*nods nods*
A beta reads the story first and correct it^^ if you are interested, send me a pm :D

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