Welcome! (Prompting: part i)

Jul 26, 2010 11:58

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This is a fic prompting meme based around the BBC series Sherlock, written by Stephen Moffat & Mark Gattis.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3b/?) sostrangechild August 19 2010, 08:41:51 UTC
"Once lived in luxury, but now cannot afford to make the payments on his car. Fell into debt and bad company. Shoes fell off in the river, or his killer..." Sherlock lifted the sleeves with plastic-gloved hands and noted something else "...killers took them as a trophy. I say it's a gang attack, due to the nature of how he was restrained - two hands around his wrists. Would be boring, except for that this man is not a corporate, and these are not his clothes. It's a set up. A dress up. He reeks of cleaning solutions, and there is grime under his fingernails - dust."

He stood, looking at Lestrade.

"He's a cleaner of some sort, you won't find him on the corporate records. From the eastern suburbs according to the mud residue up his legs. Couldn't have been in the water for more than fifteen minutes, or the mud would have washed off," mused Sherlock.

John pulled on a pair of plastic gloves and examined the body for his own benefit. After checking the man's wrists and neck, looking for injuries elsewhere, he prised open the mouth. Inside was a small fish, barely alive, gills trying to process the air. He paled, backing off a little.

Something about it reminded of him. Trapped between two worlds, he supposed, unable to control itself from panicking. Except the fish at least had a place it could call it's natural environment. John didn't really know what his natural environment was. War, perhaps? In the dry, dry deserts where his skin would chafe, and he would get itchy from a lack of water. Or was it London, where a slightly too heavy fall of rain would aggravate his scales to form under his skin, again causing discomfort? Maybe it was neither of these, and really he was at his best underwater.

"Oh god, that is foul," said Donovan, breaking his thoughts.

When he looked back into the mouth, the fish was dead. A leather-gloved hand came to rest on his shoulder.

"We can leave now," whispered Sherlock.

Numbly, John nodded, peeled the thin plastic from his hands, dumping it in a human-waste disposal unit.

........

"You're a very strange man," said Sherlock.

Ignoring him, John sank under the warm waters of his salted bath, curling his tail to fit. The detective had upturned the laundry crate, and was sitting on it, hands pressed between his knees. John wasn't quite sure when he'd allowed Sherlock into the bathroom, but the point was, Sherlock was in the bathroom while John was technically naked. For some reason, this didn't distress him as much as it used to.

"Why?" he asked as he resurfaced, "You should be able to figure me out. I'm not exactly a closed-book."

"You don't mind the war-zone, but as soon as a fish is dying, you get upset."

Ah. So while he had noticed John's internal conflict, he couldn't place it into a proper category. Considering it was emotionally based, it didn't surprise John.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 19 2010, 08:43:06 UTC
"It feels like kindred. The fish, I mean."

"Well that's just stupid," said Sherlock.

"It is not," huffed John.

"Yes it is," insisted Sherlock, "You don't really care about killing a human, which by the way is another 'kindred', but you tear up at a fish? It's contradicting, and that makes it stupid."

While John saw Sherlock's point, he still felt a bit defensive about the situation.

"As a doctor, you should know that not everything can be saved."

Which was very true. John had seen many good people die on the lines of Afghanistan. He was almost sure that he'd seen more people die in his arms than Sherlock would ever. Sherlock would never understand.

"Momento mori, 'remember you must die'!"

Sherlock couldn't understand. But hell, John would try.

"As a doctor, I strive to save as many lives as I can! And while I have experienced death in a way you haven't, I still get torn up about killing!"

There. He'd said it.

"And does getting upset help anyone?" asked Sherlock, "No. It doesn't. So why do you still feel sad?"

There was a wet thwack as scales connected with skin. Sherlock touched his cheek.

"You don't get it, and I don't expect you to, but please, have some tact for once, and leave it alone," said John quietly.

He submerged himself again before Sherlock could respond, and when he came back up to pull the plug on the bath, Sherlock was gone.

In the bin was a tin of sardines, presumably for one of Sherlock's experiments. However, it had been left unopened.

END OF PART THREE

Thank you for being patient! Updates will be slower now because of various real life commitments. Sorry about this chapter - It's pretty bad.

And if anyone is interested in the artist I mentioned, here's a link to his work (Warning, while artistic, it's NSFW) www.etchinghouse.com.au/pages/norman_lindsay.php

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) ikchen August 19 2010, 10:49:07 UTC
*purrs* Aww, that was adorable. Quite emotional and all :)
As usual, can't wait for more ;)

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) synekdokee August 20 2010, 02:21:37 UTC
I love this story so so much.

(A delay on the art, sorry!)

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 21 2010, 05:40:08 UTC
I love it that you love it. :D

(Don't worry, I'm so happy you're even making art!)

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 20 2010, 19:34:16 UTC
I keep waiting for poor John to be attacked by water balloon wielding kids... because that would suck and probably not end well for anyone.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 21 2010, 00:04:03 UTC
Now that's an idea...I'll keep it in mind anon. Thank you for suggesting it!

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 21 2010, 02:57:50 UTC
Welcome xD Gives a fun option for spontaneous plot acquisition, at least.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) thunderess August 21 2010, 06:04:38 UTC
What happens when it rains?? Poor John. He was better off at war...

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 21 2010, 07:32:06 UTC
He has to be careful not to get soaked. Poor thing.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) sostrangechild August 22 2010, 23:17:31 UTC
Oh, and I LOVE your icon.

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Re: SPLASH: In which John slaps Sherlock with his tail (3c/?) thunderess August 22 2010, 23:37:39 UTC
haha I love it too. It's horribly addictive to stare at though. Very distracting xD

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ATTENTION - SPLASH UPDATES sostrangechild September 22 2010, 11:42:17 UTC
All further updates to this story are being posted on my journal. :) Thank you for your co-operation.

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