FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (6/7)
anonymous
January 14 2011, 15:46:47 UTC
Sherlock hails a cab with one hand while the other looks up train schedules on his mobile. If he recalls correctly (which he does, obviously) then his destination is a small estate near Chichester that has been bequeathed to Mycroft. He is narrowing down the fastest possible method of travel when an unmarked black car pulls up along side the cab. Sherlock huffs in annoyance; he is only half way to the train station, and even if he makes a break for it, he will still get there after Mycroft has muddled the timetables hopelessly. It makes him restless and impatient, illogically so, as an hour wasted in Mycroft’s presence will have little to no effect on the outcome of his actions.
That doesn’t mean he has to go quietly, though. He makes the assistant pay the cabbie, and after 10 minutes of sharing a backseat with Sherlock, Mycroft’s usually unflappable right hand woman looks strained. Strained enough to slam the door behind him as he enters Mycroft’s office, at least, which would normally leave him smug, if nothing else, but all he can manage as he flops gracelessly into the chair in front of the desk his irritation.
Mycroft very deliberately ignores him for the page he is currently writing on, which he finishes with a flourish before calmly placing his fountain pen exactly parallel to the right edge of the paper; he then laces his fingers on the desk top while leaning back in his chair. His eyes are appraising when they finally meet Sherlock’s, and there is at least two full minutes of silent eye contact before Mycroft gives the tiniest quirk of an eyebrow.
“Chichester, Sherlock? Feeling a bit nostalgic, were we?”
In lieu of giving a verbal answer, Sherlock opted to glare and huff.
Mycroft only smiled, dropping his chin slightly toward his chest as he always did when he knew something Sherlock did not.
“Do you really think you are going to find it, Sherlock,” Mycroft breathed out, “it has been, after all, three decades since you abandoned your heart to the tender mercies of nature.”
“I know that,” Sherlock ground out. He was very aware of it, actually, and had been very consciously not thinking about that fact. And that the calculated probably of finding the thing was slim to non-existent.
Another condescending smile from Mycroft. “Well. As long as you are aware.”
At this Mycroft gracefully slid his chair out and stood, padding noiselessly across the plush carpet to the wall- to a painting, a rather dreary landscape of London- which he then swung out to reveal a safe.
Sherlock did not resist the urge to roll his eyes. Mycroft could be so unbearable dramatic.
The code is entered, the door opened, and from his position in front of the desk, Sherlock is unable to see what the safe contained. Reaching inside, Mycroft carefully removes an object of clear glass, and with his fingertips gripping the top only, Mycroft walks over to Sherlock’s chair and offers him the unopened canning jar.
It is the most pathetic thing Sherlock had ever seen.
The jar is barely big enough, his heart having grown as he did, but even then Sherlock knew it should be larger, healthier, more vibrant. It looked nothing like John’s heart, colored a glorious shade of red with a strong steady beat. His is darker, almost grey in color, wasted and pitiful, weakly throbbing at the bottom of the jar.
Sherlock reaches a hand out, and lets the jar rest in his palm. The lid hadn’t been closed tight enough, trace flakes of silt and clay lined the bottom, with the occasional rusted red powder of old blood. The jar itself is dusty, almost filmy, and clearly has never been cleaned or opened.
Mycroft rests a hand on his shoulder and Sherlock started at the contact, “It’s not as bad as it looks.” He said softly, “It only needs a bit of exercise.”
“Speak for yourself.” Sherlock mumbles in an all too late effort to save face. Something is different, though, in Mycroft’s tone. His words repeated in Sherlock’s head as he slipped the jar into his coat pocket. Mycroft, underneath the condescension and disdain, had sounded almost… concerned. Worried.
As he turned to leave, Sherlock wondered if that had always been there, layered and hidden. If he is only now able to hear it.
FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (7/7)
anonymous
January 14 2011, 15:47:28 UTC
Mycroft’s assistant looks relieved at Sherlock’s silence during the trip back to Baker Street; Sherlock spares her no notice beyond that initial glance. He is entirely preoccupied.
The entire ride, Sherlock’s mind is in a whirlwind; it is impossible to pin down a single thought. Clearly this is what he wanted, to find his heart and give it to John so John’s heart wouldn’t fall to pieces. That had been his ultimate goal in leaving the flat today.
But it all was so very, very illogical. How is this, Sherlock’s pathetic, wasted heart and all the pitiful emotions that came with it, how is this conducive to him? Sherlock hadn’t had one clear thought since Mycroft handed the jar over. It obviously is not beneficial to him in any way, it is apparent that this was a rash decision made with incomplete data, and Sherlock is just about to announce that to the driver and demand he turn around when the car pulls up to Baker Street.
Apparently Mycroft’s assistant had not forgiven his earlier transgressions; Sherlock is unceremoniously shoved out the door.
He would have to return the thing to Mycroft tomorrow, then. The repercussions of destroying it would not be worth facing, best to let it gather dust in Mycroft’s melodramatic wall vault, safe and gathering dust far away from Sherlock.
Emboldened by this decision, Sherlock found the strength to ascend the stairs.
That would be the best course of action, he thought as he pushed the door open. It would be of no benefit to him to keep the damn thing.
But then there was John, folded up on the far end of the green couch with his laptop, attempting to ignore him as he poked at the keyboard. John, who inexplicably loved him. John, who had handed Sherlock his heart.
And Sherlock understood. He would never benefit from this complicated emotional business of having his own heart. John, however, would. And Sherlock realizes he is willing to do anything that would make John happy. That would keep his heart from cracking, keep Sherlock from causing him pain, ever again.
Sherlock seats himself at the other end of the couch as he pulls the jar from his pocket. His heart, against all odds, is still pulsating weakly. It is so much less than John Watson deserves, but for some god forsaken reason, it seems to be all that he wants.
Sherlock places the jar at John’s left hand, before drawing his knees up to rest his chin on them. He could see his heart beating faster in the jar, out of nervousness and fear. John could so easily change his mind and decide that Sherlock wasn’t worth the effort. Sherlock feels sick at the thought, so he watches John’s face instead.
He watches John notice the jar, wrapping a hand around it as he shoots Sherlock a look of confusion. He watches John bring the jar up and turn it over so he could see the contents.
Watches John’s look of complete surprise. Watches John swing his head up to meet eyes with Sherlock.
Watches John smile.
Sherlock feels his heart flutter.
THE END.
Just wanted to apologize to anyone following (is anyone following?) for the long hiatus this fic suffered. Wish I had a reasonable excuse, aside from lack of inspiration- so, I’m sorry. And a huge, massive thank you to everyone who commented. I really do appreciate it.
Re: FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (7/7)
anonymous
January 15 2011, 14:53:43 UTC
I had forgotten this one, so I had to go back and re-read the other parts. It's a beautiful story, and I'm so glad you finished it! For some reason, I'm particularly fond of the little detail that when Sherlock has his heart back, he can tell that Mycroft really is concerned about him.
Re: FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (7/7)shiverelectricJanuary 17 2011, 22:27:53 UTC
This is so wonderful, I love the way you treated the heart as a physical and metaphysical item, and the end, god, the end killed me. Aww, Sherlock and his poor heart, but I do love a happy ending!
Re: FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (7/7)ginbitchJanuary 30 2011, 22:49:58 UTC
GAH!!!
This is one of the most original and amazing pieces of writing that I have seen on lj. Or off it for that matter! _So_ much love for this!!! It is absolutely perfect.
Re: FILL: The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs (7/7)
anonymous
February 4 2011, 21:49:01 UTC
Odd. Last week in one of our literature classes we read an essay about a book, A Nail Merchant at Nightfall by Mika Waltari. Apparently the novel starts when a former nail merchant finds his heart in a linen closet where his wife had stored it, and gets all excited and runs off to have some adventures. The thought was so baffling and intriguing that I'm insanely happy to discover fanfics with this kind of setup.
Sherlock hails a cab with one hand while the other looks up train schedules on his mobile. If he recalls correctly (which he does, obviously) then his destination is a small estate near Chichester that has been bequeathed to Mycroft. He is narrowing down the fastest possible method of travel when an unmarked black car pulls up along side the cab. Sherlock huffs in annoyance; he is only half way to the train station, and even if he makes a break for it, he will still get there after Mycroft has muddled the timetables hopelessly. It makes him restless and impatient, illogically so, as an hour wasted in Mycroft’s presence will have little to no effect on the outcome of his actions.
That doesn’t mean he has to go quietly, though. He makes the assistant pay the cabbie, and after 10 minutes of sharing a backseat with Sherlock, Mycroft’s usually unflappable right hand woman looks strained. Strained enough to slam the door behind him as he enters Mycroft’s office, at least, which would normally leave him smug, if nothing else, but all he can manage as he flops gracelessly into the chair in front of the desk his irritation.
Mycroft very deliberately ignores him for the page he is currently writing on, which he finishes with a flourish before calmly placing his fountain pen exactly parallel to the right edge of the paper; he then laces his fingers on the desk top while leaning back in his chair. His eyes are appraising when they finally meet Sherlock’s, and there is at least two full minutes of silent eye contact before Mycroft gives the tiniest quirk of an eyebrow.
“Chichester, Sherlock? Feeling a bit nostalgic, were we?”
In lieu of giving a verbal answer, Sherlock opted to glare and huff.
Mycroft only smiled, dropping his chin slightly toward his chest as he always did when he knew something Sherlock did not.
“Do you really think you are going to find it, Sherlock,” Mycroft breathed out, “it has been, after all, three decades since you abandoned your heart to the tender mercies of nature.”
“I know that,” Sherlock ground out. He was very aware of it, actually, and had been very consciously not thinking about that fact. And that the calculated probably of finding the thing was slim to non-existent.
Another condescending smile from Mycroft. “Well. As long as you are aware.”
At this Mycroft gracefully slid his chair out and stood, padding noiselessly across the plush carpet to the wall- to a painting, a rather dreary landscape of London- which he then swung out to reveal a safe.
Sherlock did not resist the urge to roll his eyes. Mycroft could be so unbearable dramatic.
The code is entered, the door opened, and from his position in front of the desk, Sherlock is unable to see what the safe contained. Reaching inside, Mycroft carefully removes an object of clear glass, and with his fingertips gripping the top only, Mycroft walks over to Sherlock’s chair and offers him the unopened canning jar.
It is the most pathetic thing Sherlock had ever seen.
The jar is barely big enough, his heart having grown as he did, but even then Sherlock knew it should be larger, healthier, more vibrant. It looked nothing like John’s heart, colored a glorious shade of red with a strong steady beat. His is darker, almost grey in color, wasted and pitiful, weakly throbbing at the bottom of the jar.
Sherlock reaches a hand out, and lets the jar rest in his palm. The lid hadn’t been closed tight enough, trace flakes of silt and clay lined the bottom, with the occasional rusted red powder of old blood. The jar itself is dusty, almost filmy, and clearly has never been cleaned or opened.
Mycroft rests a hand on his shoulder and Sherlock started at the contact, “It’s not as bad as it looks.” He said softly, “It only needs a bit of exercise.”
“Speak for yourself.” Sherlock mumbles in an all too late effort to save face. Something is different, though, in Mycroft’s tone. His words repeated in Sherlock’s head as he slipped the jar into his coat pocket. Mycroft, underneath the condescension and disdain, had sounded almost… concerned. Worried.
As he turned to leave, Sherlock wondered if that had always been there, layered and hidden. If he is only now able to hear it.
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Mycroft’s assistant looks relieved at Sherlock’s silence during the trip back to Baker Street; Sherlock spares her no notice beyond that initial glance. He is entirely preoccupied.
The entire ride, Sherlock’s mind is in a whirlwind; it is impossible to pin down a single thought. Clearly this is what he wanted, to find his heart and give it to John so John’s heart wouldn’t fall to pieces. That had been his ultimate goal in leaving the flat today.
But it all was so very, very illogical. How is this, Sherlock’s pathetic, wasted heart and all the pitiful emotions that came with it, how is this conducive to him? Sherlock hadn’t had one clear thought since Mycroft handed the jar over. It obviously is not beneficial to him in any way, it is apparent that this was a rash decision made with incomplete data, and Sherlock is just about to announce that to the driver and demand he turn around when the car pulls up to Baker Street.
Apparently Mycroft’s assistant had not forgiven his earlier transgressions; Sherlock is unceremoniously shoved out the door.
He would have to return the thing to Mycroft tomorrow, then. The repercussions of destroying it would not be worth facing, best to let it gather dust in Mycroft’s melodramatic wall vault, safe and gathering dust far away from Sherlock.
Emboldened by this decision, Sherlock found the strength to ascend the stairs.
That would be the best course of action, he thought as he pushed the door open. It would be of no benefit to him to keep the damn thing.
But then there was John, folded up on the far end of the green couch with his laptop, attempting to ignore him as he poked at the keyboard. John, who inexplicably loved him. John, who had handed Sherlock his heart.
And Sherlock understood. He would never benefit from this complicated emotional business of having his own heart. John, however, would. And Sherlock realizes he is willing to do anything that would make John happy. That would keep his heart from cracking, keep Sherlock from causing him pain, ever again.
Sherlock seats himself at the other end of the couch as he pulls the jar from his pocket. His heart, against all odds, is still pulsating weakly. It is so much less than John Watson deserves, but for some god forsaken reason, it seems to be all that he wants.
Sherlock places the jar at John’s left hand, before drawing his knees up to rest his chin on them. He could see his heart beating faster in the jar, out of nervousness and fear. John could so easily change his mind and decide that Sherlock wasn’t worth the effort. Sherlock feels sick at the thought, so he watches John’s face instead.
He watches John notice the jar, wrapping a hand around it as he shoots Sherlock a look of confusion. He watches John bring the jar up and turn it over so he could see the contents.
Watches John’s look of complete surprise. Watches John swing his head up to meet eyes with Sherlock.
Watches John smile.
Sherlock feels his heart flutter.
THE END.
Just wanted to apologize to anyone following (is anyone following?) for the long hiatus this fic suffered. Wish I had a reasonable excuse, aside from lack of inspiration- so, I’m sorry. And a huge, massive thank you to everyone who commented. I really do appreciate it.
And thanks for reading!
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I gave up on this some time ago, so the update is such pleasant surprise. such amazing story! IMMD!!!
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(Appropriate icon is appropriate!)
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This is fantastic! The idea and your execution is spectacular. LOVE IT! ♥♥♥♥
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This is one of the most original and amazing pieces of writing that I have seen on lj. Or off it for that matter! _So_ much love for this!!! It is absolutely perfect.
<3 <3 <3
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Absolutely lovely.
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Oh, and here's that GW fic on the AO3 if anybody wants it: http://archiveofourown.org/works/2894
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and mycaptcha is textsad political ...mycroft are you watching me?
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