Filled - Part 4/4
anonymous
October 18 2010, 16:56:25 UTC
‘Jesus,’ John breathed, when Sherlock had managed to draw a full breath, and his white-knuckled grip on the headboard had relaxed fractionally. He readjusted his grip on Sherlock’s hips and drove upwards. ‘Jesus, I can’t believe you just did that. That was one of the hottest things I’ve ever seen.’
As John sweated and panted for breath beneath him, clearly moments away from his own finish, Sherlock braced his arms against the headboard and tried to offer some resistance, pushing back against John’s increasingly erratic and frantic thrusting. He could feel himself starting to slide into a limp, post-orgasmic state, but tried desperately to hang on, to stay upright for a few more minutes and to try to give John a fraction of the pleasure that John had just given him.
It didn’t even take a few minutes, as it turned out. John hadn’t been exaggerating when he said that the sight of Sherlock coming without being touched was a huge turn-on, because it seemed barely half a minute before John dragged in an impossibly deep breath and slammed up hard into Sherlock, coming with a strangled noise.
Afterwards, Sherlock allowed himself to collapse forward onto John’s chest, feeling John’s hand come up to settle at the nape of his neck and tug gently at the damp strands there. He could feel John’s cock softening inside him; in another few minutes it would slip free but for now there was something strangely intimate about still being joined like this, while their heartbeats stopped pounding and breaths gradually came more slowly.
John’s breath tickled his ear as he lazily asked Sherlock, ‘Do you always do that?’
‘No, not usually. Although you’re right that I’m quite…sensitive.’
There was a loaded pause, and then Sherlock could hear the grin in John’s voice as he answered, ‘Yes. Yes, I think I deduced that for myself, thanks.’
Sherlock swatted at John’s ribs half-heartedly, too drugged with pleasure to put any real force behind it. ‘Oh, shut up.’
Author!Anon
anonymous
October 24 2010, 09:28:59 UTC
Hiya
Author-Anon here saying thanks very much for the positive feedback! I'm glad you liked it. & yes, I am the same person who did the 'positive dirty talk' fill. At first I was surprised that you picked up on that but I've just been back over to re-read it with a critical eye & pfff yes, no wonder you could see it, they're so very, very similar. Hmmm. Must work on tendency not to just write the same story over & over again...!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm sorry I'm so late! The fact that someone filled one of my prompts fills me with such happiness I can barely contain myself. It's almost 5 am here and I'm squealing like a kid. Best fill I could have hoped for. Did you also do that awesome dirty-talk fic too? Your style seems familiar. Anyway, very hot. Thank you so much!
Author!Anon
anonymous
October 24 2010, 09:34:28 UTC
Hiya
Author-Anon here. Thanks very much for the compliment! Yes, I did the 'positive dirty talk' fill. Was a bit surprised at first that you could tell but have just been back to re-read it with a critical eye & pfff, no wonder you could tell, they're so very, VERY similar. Must work on capability to write more diverse stuff!
Thanks for commenting!
PS - Catpcha made me LOL: 'Masked same' Yes Captcha. I am anon, & I am the same person who wrote that other fill...
As John sweated and panted for breath beneath him, clearly moments away from his own finish, Sherlock braced his arms against the headboard and tried to offer some resistance, pushing back against John’s increasingly erratic and frantic thrusting. He could feel himself starting to slide into a limp, post-orgasmic state, but tried desperately to hang on, to stay upright for a few more minutes and to try to give John a fraction of the pleasure that John had just given him.
It didn’t even take a few minutes, as it turned out. John hadn’t been exaggerating when he said that the sight of Sherlock coming without being touched was a huge turn-on, because it seemed barely half a minute before John dragged in an impossibly deep breath and slammed up hard into Sherlock, coming with a strangled noise.
Afterwards, Sherlock allowed himself to collapse forward onto John’s chest, feeling John’s hand come up to settle at the nape of his neck and tug gently at the damp strands there. He could feel John’s cock softening inside him; in another few minutes it would slip free but for now there was something strangely intimate about still being joined like this, while their heartbeats stopped pounding and breaths gradually came more slowly.
John’s breath tickled his ear as he lazily asked Sherlock, ‘Do you always do that?’
‘No, not usually. Although you’re right that I’m quite…sensitive.’
There was a loaded pause, and then Sherlock could hear the grin in John’s voice as he answered, ‘Yes. Yes, I think I deduced that for myself, thanks.’
Sherlock swatted at John’s ribs half-heartedly, too drugged with pleasure to put any real force behind it. ‘Oh, shut up.’
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I don't even usually like John topping but but *relocates to her bunk*
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So awesome. I loved this.
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*off to bunk*
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off topic inane question: Anon, are you by chance the same anon who did the positive dirty talk fill? Just curious.
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And this was unbelievably hot anon, colour me impressed (and several other things)
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Oh, and..."gornseen accepted."
For some reason, THIS is the captcha that's freaking me out.
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(and HOMG love the dirty talk fic!!! Thank you!!)
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Author-Anon here saying thanks very much for the positive feedback! I'm glad you liked it. & yes, I am the same person who did the 'positive dirty talk' fill. At first I was surprised that you picked up on that but I've just been back over to re-read it with a critical eye & pfff yes, no wonder you could see it, they're so very, very similar. Hmmm. Must work on tendency not to just write the same story over & over again...!
Thanks for commenting!
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And yes, I am serious. Consider it a request, if you must.
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*collapses in a pile of goo*
That was so hot!
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Sorry, can't be bothered to anon.
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Author-Anon here. Thanks very much for the compliment! Yes, I did the 'positive dirty talk' fill. Was a bit surprised at first that you could tell but have just been back to re-read it with a critical eye & pfff, no wonder you could tell, they're so very, VERY similar. Must work on capability to write more diverse stuff!
Thanks for commenting!
PS - Catpcha made me LOL: 'Masked same' Yes Captcha. I am anon, & I am the same person who wrote that other fill...
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