Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3
anonymous
November 11 2010, 18:41:39 UTC
He struggles free of Sherlock's grasp and yes, Sherlock has tracks of tears coming from his eyes and trailing down into his hair. "I hurt you. God, I'm sorry. I'm so, so sorry." He touches a hand to the tears, brushes them off with his thumbs.
"You didn't hurt me." Sherlock sounds miserable, voice thick. "Don't worry. You can, you can finish. I'm fine."
"You wouldn't be crying if you were fine. You don't have to lie to me." He doesn't say how much it hurts to hear Sherlock assumed he'd be so callous as to continue fucking him even as he cries.
"It's not you. I just do this when I come. I'm sorry but I can't control it." John moves to kiss him but Sherlock turns his head away, raises an arm and hides in the bend of his elbow.
"You should have told me. I was so worried." Sherlock is quiet for a long moment, just shuddering breaths which shake his lithe frame.
"I didn't want you to know."
"Did you think I'd care?" He drags Sherlock's arm away from his face, curls their fingers together, but Sherlock still resolutely keeps his head turned. "Did you honestly think that it'd matter?" Finally, finally Sherlock looks at him, and the tears have mostly stopped, his eyes rimmed in red and moisture clinging to his lashes.
"All the others did. Who wants to have sex with someone who cries during the middle of it?" He leans down, kisses Sherlock now, keeps at it until Sherlock hesitantly responds.
"I don't care, Sherlock. You didn't have to try and hide this from me. It's nothing to be ashamed of." Kisses him again.
"You honestly don't mind?" He doesn't answer, just rolls his hips and Sherlock cries out as John hits his oversensitive prostate. "Ah! John!"
"I really don't." He thrusts a second time, one more and Sherlock contracts around him, and he's coming, desperately seeking to kiss Sherlock as his body tenses and relaxes.
He stays there, kissing Sherlock as his erection softens, for a long moment until the condom becomes uncomfortable with his release caught in the tip. He slides out and Sherlock moves his leg, props his foot against the mattress. John scoots down, inspects Sherlock quickly for any damage and then an impulse takes him and he leans forward, swiftly kisses Sherlock's pink little arsehole.
"John!" Sherlock's voice is high, surprised by the action, and John grins. He stands, strips off the condom and tosses it in the wastebasket before he lies back down, pulling Sherlock toward him, Sherlock's back settling against his chest and Sherlock's longer legs tangling with his. The height difference makes it awkward, but he finds it impossible to complain.
"John?"
"Hm?"
"Thank you, for- thank you."
"You're worth it, Sherlock." And he knows that Sherlock may not believe him, probably doesn't given how he'd tried to hide it from John, but he hopes he can convince Sherlock of the sincerity of his words. But for now he just snuggles closer and goes to sleep.
Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3
anonymous
November 13 2010, 06:59:11 UTC
Thanks you! I love vulnerable Sherlock because it gives John the chance to be sweet and lovely.
Also, if I understand correctly you think you've read another one of my fills? May I ask what fill it is you think I've done? I've filled four prompts so far and am interested in seeing if my writing is so distinguishable.
Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3
anonymous
December 5 2010, 02:13:34 UTC
I didn't see this until just now, but you can see I did come back to read it again! (And I'm sure it wont be the last time.)
So, this one reminds me of the one where Sherlock is very loud but John doesn't care, the one where Sherlock's protrate is super sensitive, the positive dirty talk one and a little bit of the formerly abused Sherlock with very wonderful loving John.
And, I have to say, these are my very favorite meme fills, so 1) if they are yours, I LOVE YOU AND KEEP WRITING THEM, or 2) they aren't, I'm desperate to know what the other four are!
Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3
anonymous
December 13 2010, 17:14:11 UTC
Oh, how funny. NONE of those are actually mine, although I read and absolutely adored both the positive dirty talk and the one where Sherlock can come just from prostate stimulation. As for the ones with Sherlock being loud and t he other on with Sherlock being abused, any chance you could give me the links? (and how did I miss them? Those sound like things I would love!)
As for other fills I've done, including this one I've now done 6. The other 5 are:
Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3
anonymous
January 13 2011, 00:59:29 UTC
This has been Copied, Pasted, and Stashed in my Fic Folder, I loved everything about it. I have such a thing for scenes where someone confesses a vulnerability, and things are OK and don't get weird, awful, or shaming.
Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 shadowfireflameApril 8 2013, 13:34:18 UTC
OMG, this was stunning! I love how Sherlock keeps apologizing for things and John's firm about telling him that he is beautiful and doesn't need to apologize for being himself. Wonderful.
"You didn't hurt me." Sherlock sounds miserable, voice thick. "Don't worry. You can, you can finish. I'm fine."
"You wouldn't be crying if you were fine. You don't have to lie to me." He doesn't say how much it hurts to hear Sherlock assumed he'd be so callous as to continue fucking him even as he cries.
"It's not you. I just do this when I come. I'm sorry but I can't control it." John moves to kiss him but Sherlock turns his head away, raises an arm and hides in the bend of his elbow.
"You should have told me. I was so worried." Sherlock is quiet for a long moment, just shuddering breaths which shake his lithe frame.
"I didn't want you to know."
"Did you think I'd care?" He drags Sherlock's arm away from his face, curls their fingers together, but Sherlock still resolutely keeps his head turned. "Did you honestly think that it'd matter?" Finally, finally Sherlock looks at him, and the tears have mostly stopped, his eyes rimmed in red and moisture clinging to his lashes.
"All the others did. Who wants to have sex with someone who cries during the middle of it?" He leans down, kisses Sherlock now, keeps at it until Sherlock hesitantly responds.
"I don't care, Sherlock. You didn't have to try and hide this from me. It's nothing to be ashamed of." Kisses him again.
"You honestly don't mind?" He doesn't answer, just rolls his hips and Sherlock cries out as John hits his oversensitive prostate. "Ah! John!"
"I really don't." He thrusts a second time, one more and Sherlock contracts around him, and he's coming, desperately seeking to kiss Sherlock as his body tenses and relaxes.
He stays there, kissing Sherlock as his erection softens, for a long moment until the condom becomes uncomfortable with his release caught in the tip. He slides out and Sherlock moves his leg, props his foot against the mattress. John scoots down, inspects Sherlock quickly for any damage and then an impulse takes him and he leans forward, swiftly kisses Sherlock's pink little arsehole.
"John!" Sherlock's voice is high, surprised by the action, and John grins. He stands, strips off the condom and tosses it in the wastebasket before he lies back down, pulling Sherlock toward him, Sherlock's back settling against his chest and Sherlock's longer legs tangling with his. The height difference makes it awkward, but he finds it impossible to complain.
"John?"
"Hm?"
"Thank you, for- thank you."
"You're worth it, Sherlock." And he knows that Sherlock may not believe him, probably doesn't given how he'd tried to hide it from John, but he hopes he can convince Sherlock of the sincerity of his words. But for now he just snuggles closer and goes to sleep.
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Vulnerable!Sherlock + tender!John gets me everytime.
(And if you are who I think you are, thank you for another gorgeous fill I'll read 60 times.)
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Also, if I understand correctly you think you've read another one of my fills? May I ask what fill it is you think I've done? I've filled four prompts so far and am interested in seeing if my writing is so distinguishable.
Thanks for commenting.
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So, this one reminds me of the one where Sherlock is very loud but John doesn't care, the one where Sherlock's protrate is super sensitive, the positive dirty talk one and a little bit of the formerly abused Sherlock with very wonderful loving John.
And, I have to say, these are my very favorite meme fills, so 1) if they are yours, I LOVE YOU AND KEEP WRITING THEM, or 2) they aren't, I'm desperate to know what the other four are!
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As for other fills I've done, including this one I've now done 6. The other 5 are:
Sherlock/John Felching
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/4076.html?thread=10763756#t10763756
Sherlock/John Intercrural sex
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/4777.html?thread=12688553#t12688553
Sherlock/John Sherlock calls sex 'Making love"
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/4076.html?thread=11153388#t11153388
Sherlock/John with Lestrade in love with Sherlock and pining
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/3114.html?thread=8611626#t8611626
Gen, friendship, Sherlock is HIV+
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/4076.html?thread=11123436#t11123436
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I'd say Sherlock needs a cuddle, but you've got that covered. ^_~
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Thanks for the comment!
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This is insanely sweet. I love your John and Sherlock so much!
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The sweetness and love imbibing this fic makes me want to ROLL AROUND IN IT FOREVER!
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As someone who actually does cry anytime I orgasm I love whenever someone writes about it.
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