Prompting Part XXIV

Jan 16, 2012 09:01

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Fill: The Cold Heaven 3b/? anonymous January 18 2012, 06:08:13 UTC
Lestrade’s office hasn’t moved. John is mildly surprised that he makes it that far without at least being asked what the hell he’s doing there, after six months of silence. People just don’t know what to say.

John knocks and is answered with a familiar, weary “yeah, come”.

He opens the door. He has clearly interrupted a meeting, but evidently not a vastly important one. Donovan turns in her seat and goes stock still, eyes frozen on his face. John barely glances at her and focuses on the Detective Inspector.

Greg Lestrade looks like shit. His hair is a touch too long and it doesn’t suit him, and the smudges beneath his eyes match the shadow along his jawline. He’s lost weight. John looks at him and realizes he’s missed the man. They’d always got on, and John begins to wish he hadn’t severed all contact.

Lestrade is the only one who isn’t surprised. He looks at John a bit expectantly, but with patience behind his eyes. God, if patience were currency that man would be rich.

Now that he’s here, though, John isn’t actually sure what he came to say or do.

“Let me prove you wrong,” was what came out. Lestrade furrowed his brow and Donovan looked as though she was halfway between a scoff and a sob. Poor sod, he sees in her eyes, taken in by the freak, he believed it all. “Let me show you that what he did was real. I watched him do it for a year and a half and while I’m not him, I’m not blind, and he taught me how to look.” John’s breath catches in his throat, but then, he’s intimately used to that feeling now. “One case is all I’m asking for.” Let me start to fix what’s been broken.

Donovan has abandoned all pretences and looks furiously astonished. She stands and opens her mouth to speak. One look from Lestrade and her teeth click shut into a grimace.

Lestrade gazes at John for a long moment. He doesn’t smile, but he nods.

Something small clicks back into place in John’s chest, and he breathes easier.

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Fill: The Cold Heaven 3c/? anonymous January 18 2012, 06:11:43 UTC
Two days before

Not much of the snow has been disturbed. Mourning is best when it’s convenient, picturesque. Sherlock stamps his feet in the drift and breathes into his hands, wishing he’d remembered his gloves.

This was not a smart idea. Returning to Britain was a death wish at best, but when Sherlock had found a way to do so that coincided with a potentially significant date he’d bundled himself into an air freight container at the Ulaanbaatar airport. China hadn’t been pleasant, mostly, but Shan hadn’t been the only strut supporting The Black Lotus and with Mycroft’s help and finances, Sherlock put a significant dent in their doings. When they discovered who he was and what he was up to, though, they’d chased Sherlock from the country and he’d been meandering in Mongolia for over a month.

“I really shouldn’t even be proposing this, given I know you probably won’t listen when I tell you not to do it.” His brother’s voice over the phone was threadbare.

“Don’t be obtuse, Mycroft. It’s unbecoming. Of course I won’t listen.”

He couldn’t risk London. It was too well-observed, and John might spot him. Sherlock chose a place where he could watch John to his heart’s content without fear. The cemetery wasn’t under surveillance, Mycroft made sure of it. All Sherlock had to do was wait, and he’d be rewarded with at least a glimpse. Maybe that would ease the knot in his chest that seemed to grow larger and gnarl further with every day he spends away.

Sherlock checks his watch. It’s nearly three PM. Are there delays on the Tube? An emergency? Surely there must be, otherwise John would be here. John is a creature of habit, of patterns if nothing else and the six month anniversary would warrant a visit in his mind.

Sherlock waits, hunched under the tree with his hands in his pockets, smoking furiously and billowing the grey of cigarette after cigarette into the frigid air like a dragon.

Mrs. Hudson visits around three-thirty and leaves a sprig of holly sitting in an Erlenmeyer flask that she must have brought from the flat. Something clenches in Sherlock’s throat at the sight of her, a small purple speck against the snow, bent over with sobs that he can only just hear from his hiding place.

Where is John?

She leaves after a half hour, and Sherlock waits well into the dark hours for a man who doesn’t come.

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Re: Fill: The Cold Heaven 3c/? anonymous January 18 2012, 12:28:22 UTC
Author!anon, you're doing a wonderful job.

I'm really curious to see what you'll do with that case Lestrade has agreed to. I also really like that Sherlock's there, waiting for John but that John doesn't show. (Not for Sherlock, but it just goes to show that John's -more- than a creature of habit). And then poor Mrs. Hudson. It's nice to see how much she cares for Sherlock.

Can't wait to read more. :D

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^ OP anonymous January 18 2012, 12:30:06 UTC
:) In my haste to tell you how much I appreciate your fill I forgot to mention I'm the OP. Oops.

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Re: Fill: The Cold Heaven 3c/? anonymous January 18 2012, 13:53:34 UTC
this is really awesome, LOVE IT, can't wait for more

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Re: Fill: The Cold Heaven 3c/? anonymous January 18 2012, 22:15:08 UTC
AHHH, author anon, so far this fic is everything I wanted from a post-Reichenbach fic and more. I love your voice, and your story, and the fact that John is taking a case. I'm figuratively on the edge of my seat.

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