for neurotoxia: Happiness is impossible (to measure)

Jun 08, 2014 12:48

Original Author: neurotoxia
Original Story Title: Nothing is more serious than pleasure
Original Story Link: http://archiveofourown.org/works/1218862
Original Story Pairings: Sherlock/Mycroft, Sherlock/Victor Trevor
Original Story Rating: T
Original Story Warnings/Content Notes: Sibling ( Read more... )

verse: bbc, rated: teen, fanwork: fic, penombrelilas, challenge: round four, warnings apply, neurotoxia

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neurotoxia June 8 2014, 21:06:48 UTC
I absolutely adore this!

It's really brave to take on an OC's perspective and write them convincingly so they fit in with the original characters, but you hit the nail on the head! I love Victor's voice, he's exactly how I imagine him. Justine also turned out lovely!

And not to mention Sherlock's adorable jealousy (Boy, do I love jealous!Sherlock)

Thank you so much :)

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nox_candida June 8 2014, 21:11:49 UTC
I enjoyed reading your Victor Trevor. He was interesting and stood out as a unique character. Sherlock/Victor isn't really my thing, but I enjoyed this. The dramatic tension and all of the details you added really captured my attention and kept me reading until the end. Great job!

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penombrelilas June 24 2014, 00:49:51 UTC
Thank you so much! I never actually thought I'd be writing any Victor/Sherlock myself. So far I've only come across Victor as the Abusive Boyfriend of the past. That is, until I read your Red Sky in Morning, which openened a whole can of other story ideas. Oh dear.

If you're interested, I've added some more Victor+Sherlock interaction for posting at AO3. Hope that doesn't ruin it! :)

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cherrytide June 9 2014, 11:38:16 UTC
I like your Victor! A nicely fleshed out character, and you did a good job of hinting at the Mycroft/Sherlock tension simmering in the background. I loved jealous!Sherlock not picking up when people are joking as well.

Great remix!

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penombrelilas June 24 2014, 00:58:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad Victor turned out okay and that you approve of socially inept!Sherlock. He's my favourite.

In case you're interested, I've added some more Victor+Sherlock interaction for posting at AO3 and hope that doesn't ruin it! :)

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unovis June 13 2014, 13:57:40 UTC
Adding to the appreciation for Victor's character and voice!

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penombrelilas June 24 2014, 00:59:55 UTC
Thank you! In case you're interested, I've added some more Victor+Sherlock interaction for posting at AO3. I hope that doesn't ruin it! :) *shameless self-promotion*

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