Nothing Like A Few Convulsions...

[thayne_m]

Title:: Nothing Like A Few Convulsions To Make A Man Commit
Author:: Thayne M.
Summary:: “If you kill me, you’re killing him.” There was a pause as the consciousness invaded his thoughts again, stealing away feelings and knowledge and anything he thought he could use, “He cares for you more than you know.”
Characters:: John, Teyla, Elizabeth
Pairing::

Comments

[2bluaeryn]

Wow, I love how you took this and made it into such a wonderful, insightful and touching piece. I've read tags for this of a similiar vein, but this one is truly outstanding.

Well done.

[thayne_m]

Thanks so much! This was my first real SGA fanfic, and I was worried I wouldn't get a good first-response, but lookit! I did! Thankyou, thankyou!

[rand0m0ne]

You did great for your first real SGA fic!! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for posting! :D

[thayne_m]

Thankyou. That's REALLY good to hear; you have no idea!

[azure_horizon]

Aw wow. Very very nice :) Tis very cute and so very in character. Thanks for the read!

[thayne_m]

I'm glad you said that. I felt pretty secure in the way I wrote Teyla, but I thought my dialogue for John was a little out of character. Nice to hear otherwise. Thanks for reading!

[nath_42]

This is exacly how I pictured John's thoughts during the whole 'Thalen' scene. You really did wonders on your first SGA's fic ! I hope you won't stop to this one. I can't wait to read more of your work.

[thrace_adams]

Oh wow. I just rewatched this episode in the last week or so, and this was just so powerful. What a brilliant look into their relationship! Great job!