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kriadydragon in sheppard_hc

Spontaneous Group Hugging

Sep 11, 2007 10:07

Title: Spontaneous Group Hugging
Author: Kriadydragon (Stealth Dragon)
Rating: PG, Gen
Characters: Teyla, Sheppard, Team.
Warnings: Chilliness and group hugging
Summary: A discussion with
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genre: gen, author: kriadydragon

Comments 44

padawan_aneiki September 12 2007, 03:24:26 UTC

Awww! *huggles them all* GROUP HUG!!! ;) Well done, m'dear as usual!

kriadydragon September 12 2007, 04:14:03 UTC

Thanks!

semirose September 12 2007, 03:28:47 UTC

Awww oh team. Group hugs for the win! Absolutely lovely.

kriadydragon September 12 2007, 04:14:55 UTC

Thank you. I've been quite partial to group hugging in fic as of late.

kristen999 September 12 2007, 03:31:19 UTC

Oh I so needed this, loved the team love and I never get tired of hypothermia fics. What I really liked about this was it being from Teyla's POV, her instinctual, no nonsense , in control direction to take care of John. Its rare to read her thoughts and I adored the fact that the team 'hug' was seen as a practical way to treat John.

Your descriptions were very vivid, really well done.

Lovely turn of phrase here:

Placating assurances to bring temporary peace to the mind could not be called hope. This, here, now - the feel of cool quaking skin, a heart beat and moving chest; seeing the motion of John's throat and the flutter of his pulse; the smell of old cloth and three scents distinct for each man; and three separate tenors of gentle breathing: bass, loud and quick

kriadydragon September 12 2007, 04:18:43 UTC

Thanks. I almost started it off with Sheppard's POV, but felt it should be all Teyla's. I don't write her as much as the others and felt it was her turn. And I love using hugs as a way to show affection. It allows for something sweet without it turning sexual.

And that was actually my favorite line to write. :)

chokolaj September 12 2007, 03:53:34 UTC

Ooo - nice! *shivers* There's something about snow and freezing that never gets old when it comes to whump possibilities, IMHO! This was lovely, hit the spot, really. Though I sort of wanted a tad bit more (any worthwhile fic does leave a taste of that!), I think you ended it perfectly. Thanks for writing this! :D

kriadydragon September 12 2007, 04:21:23 UTC

Thanks. I almost wrote an infirmary scene, but once I reached the end felt that it would have been too much and unnecessary. However, if someone would like to do an infirmary scene tag, I'm okay with that.

jennytork September 12 2007, 04:05:17 UTC

Loved this 'quirky' story -- pun fully intended.

kriadydragon September 12 2007, 04:21:42 UTC

Tee-hee! Thanks.