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FIC: Thicker Than Water (2/7) - Brothers 'verse

Aug 20, 2013 20:14

Title: "Thicker Than Water - Chapter 2/7"
Fandom: The Avengers/The Bourne Legacy
Characters: Clint Barton, Aaron Cross, Phil Coulson, mentions of Natasha Romanoff and Marta Shearing
Pairings: background Clint Barton/Natasha Romanoff, background Aaron Cross/Marta Shearing
Rating: PG-13
Length: 1937 words
Genre: Family / Adventure / Hurt/Comfort
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the bourne legacy, hurt/comfort, the avengers, action, crossover, clint barton/hawkeye, brothers'verse, fanfic, aaron cross

Comments 8

soncnica August 20 2013, 18:34:00 UTC

Mmmm, the last three paragraphs are fantastic! The glove, awesome choice! And I love the fact that Aaron had to take it off, because Clint was not able to! Seriously the last three paragraphs are just wonderfully written and packed with so many small, lovely things that make this story a great brothers h/c story! Awesome!

S.

Now update soon, damn you! This was a long wait! :-)

*hugs*

shenshen77 August 20 2013, 18:56:37 UTC

YAY :D I'm so glad you read this as soon as I posted it, I can't stop grinning after reading your comment :D I love this chapter and I'm so glad you like it, especially the last part. This is where they really come together for me.

Of course it would be the glove, what else could there be ;) *does happy dance because you like it*

The rest of the fic is with my beta, so I hope to keep the updates coming fairly frequently now :D *hugs*

S.

soncnica August 20 2013, 19:10:29 UTC

I had been looking forward to reading this since what seems like forever! :-):-) I was just on your LJ this morning hoping the story was up, but noup, wasn't :-) but it is here now and I read it right away!

And really the last 3 paragraphs really .. gripped me... ya know? Maybe because they were writen with a bit more details or maybe because the /c came out to play with full force, or maybe because it was just brothers depending on each other ... and I think that with these two, in this 'verse, you can go soooo deep into everything ... and that is what I wanted when I suggested this ... for you to really play with h/c and them being brothers! :-)

Yay for quicker updates! :-):-)

S.

shenshen77 August 20 2013, 19:17:09 UTC

I just got the beta back last night and posted as soon as I could :)

Yeah, I know what you mean and that was what I hoped to accomplish here. Aaron trusts Clint to make the right decision, Clint trusts Aaron to make it right. And man, I love them and I just want them to be okay and go to the baseball game together and have a beer and laugh... but that's not happening ;) I loved writing this and I'm really glad you suggested it *hugs* It's all down to you!

I hope they'll be quicker ;);)

alphaflyer August 21 2013, 00:31:03 UTC

I commented on FFN, but man, that was intense. You really put the H into H/C, my friend ...

Splinter semantics. Chortle.

shenshen77 August 21 2013, 07:12:20 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting twice, my friend :D The C will come, it will! But there will be some more H as well (and yes, I'm using capital letters on purpose ;)). But the whump serves a purpose ;)

I love that dialogue there, splinter and trees and semantics, lol.

crazy4orcas August 21 2013, 01:05:38 UTC

Well worth the wait! Great job with the descriptions of their injuries, not too graphic but still intense.

Still loving the banter. And I really like how naturally they've come to depend on each other.

You really are nuts, aren’t you?”

“Runs in the family,” -- LOL

shenshen77 August 21 2013, 07:18:23 UTC

Thank you, that means the world to me! It's a tough balance to strike and I'm glad it seemed to have worked.

Yay, the banter is my favorite thing, it's so much fun to write. This is all about them bonding, and I'm so pleased that that seems to come naturally.

I love that exchange so much, thank you for picking it :D