Fic: Bend But Don't Break

[dragontatt]

Title: Bend But Don't Break
Author: dragontatt
Pairing/Fandom= Shaun/Zach from Shelter
Rating: Mature, R- whatever you wanna call it, there's lots of sex...
Disclaimer: Shaun, Zach and the wonderful world of Shelter do not belong to me. Not profit is made and no insult is intended. Honest!
Word Count: 10618

For the Finish It All Off Ficathon by sinandmisery and shiplessheathenBetea'

Comments

[stuckinspokane]

Well.... that was just - wow. I really think my words have left me this time. All I can say is wow. Lovely. Absolutely beautiful. And the shirt had it coming. Pink? Come on, Shaun. What were you thinking when you bought that?

how he’d practically had to beg Zach to come for him

I would like to see this scene, however. ^__^

[dragontatt]

Oh I love to leave people speechless, so thank you! And yes the shirt definitely deserved it.

That scene you're talking about? I sorta wrote it for the Shelter First Time Challenge- it's right here
*cheesy grin*

[spikedluv]

“So, the student has finally surprised the Master?”

“Ah, young Butterfly, you surprise me all the time.”

Very nice! I can imagine Zach being nervous on his first day and hating that Shaun wasn't there. Loved the bit above, and the last lines. *g*

[dragontatt]

Glad you liked it.

And by last lines, you mean the *very* last lines, or all the porn? *g*

[spikedluv]

The very last lines. *g*

[harknessgirl]

OMG OMG OMG.
This was just amazing!! I so need to watch this film again.
If only this could have been Shelter 2 LOL.
Left me speechless woman!!
Thanks for writing this, you have made me fell all tingly. *grin*

[dragontatt]

Oooh- tingly is good. Glad you enjoyed it. lol

[brokeback1963]

OH.MY.GOD!!! I'm seriously speechless!! You clever woman, this is a gem!! I LOVE IT!!!

I'm not gonna quote anything because when I saw what I've been putting apart to quote and comment later I realized that it took THREE pages!!! lol!! But I'm saving this, and I'm gonna re read it lots of times!!

This is fucking perfect, so very beautiful, SWEET, funny and HOT!! I love how vulnerable Zach was, feeling that he was being abandoned; love the phone calls, love Cody and his "pancake day", LOVE the note Shaun wrote for him (sooooo tender!!!) and the gift (awww, that melted my heart away), and of course the visuals you posted; that was brilliant!! **claps**

Oh, and what Zach did with the shirt was stunning. I mean, that scene is made of awesome!! How unique and original to have Zach doing that!!

I really can't even start to tell you how amazing this is!! Bravo girl!!

And I'm so glad Susan helped you with the beta. She's TOO good for words!! You both are the perfect team!!

Much love and hugs.

Tammy.

[dragontatt]

I'm so glad you liked it, especially the shirt scene. I did have a bit of a 'omg will everyone complain this is OOC?' but then Susan helped me get over that. She's good for that *g*

*hugs*

[stargazer60]

Brilliant....

You've got the characterizations down perfectly....I could *so* hear their voices saying your words.....

Really, really enjoyed this...

[dragontatt]

Thanks so much!