Fic: Unsaid (1/2)

Oct 19, 2009 21:22

Title: Unsaid (1/2)
Author: d_sieya
Spoilers: The Gothowitz Deviation
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for cussing
Word Count: 5,628
Disclaimer: Blah blah blah I wish.
Author’s Note My contribution to the October Challenge! :D Actually it’s a sequel to my own fic, that I was bribed persuaded into writing. I’d recommend reading it first because it’s referenced a lot ( Read more... )

fan: fiction, rating: pg-13

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defyprobability October 20 2009, 04:56:04 UTC
YES!

Laughably predictable, yes, but I was waiting and waiting for Leonard to walk in on them. Oh how excellent.

I'm very glad you decided to (or were bribed to) make a sequel. Ooo. I'm anxiously anticipating a continuation. :D

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d_sieya October 20 2009, 16:49:36 UTC
Lol, I tried to let you all know with that line that I knew that it's such a cliche to have Leonard walk in on them, but he had to find out somehow and that was the best way. I'm glad it worked for you besides :D

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arabian October 20 2009, 05:03:00 UTC
So, so, so, so very glad to see the (1/?) this time. Phew! I love this fic so, so, so much. I could quote my favorite parts, but I'd be quoting the majority of the fic. Just keep it up, keep it up, this is splendiferous!!

Appropriate icon is appropriate.

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d_sieya October 20 2009, 16:53:03 UTC
Appropriate icon is appropriate.

My e-mail blocks images so at first I was like, "um, I guess my icon's appropriate?" but then I got here and I instantly hit myself for not using that one as well. OH WELL. Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, I was writing and every time I got stuck I was like "OMG THIS SUCKZ SHE'LL HATE IT AHHSDKJFHIOK." So. Yes. Pleased. I am.

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babebubeboink99 October 20 2009, 05:46:51 UTC
Thank God it's only two or 3 chaps, because frankly after this last episode I'm not sure I can take much more heartache. Love how you're so consistent with the tension. It radiates throughout every word in the chapter without driving the reader catatonic with the angst. And in one this long that ain't easy. So kudos.

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d_sieya October 20 2009, 16:56:22 UTC
OH GOD you don't know how happy I am to hear that. I was so worried it was going to be an angst/mush fest, and as characters P&S weren't helping me like at all because I couldn't realistically stop them from interrupting each other and dragging out the arguments until Penny threatened to neuter him with her eyes.

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artic_fox October 20 2009, 06:49:14 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad there is going to be more, and this was a great second part. Your Sheldon is wonderful!

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d_sieya October 20 2009, 16:59:30 UTC
Thank you! He's so exhausting because he overthinks everything, but I had a lot of fun getting into his head. Now if I can only get into his pants, everything would be right in the world. Cough. Sorry. Channeling Wolowitz.

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danceonstardust October 20 2009, 07:41:06 UTC
Seriously, you are a great writer hon, the tension and the emotion is all there. I love this series and omg, the way you write Sheldon, I agree with artic_fox your sheldon is wonderful and so spot on! :D I can't wait for more. I just love every little bit of this fic, I actually read it over and over!


Jude

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d_sieya October 20 2009, 18:09:18 UTC
[embarrassed] You're too wonderful. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! I'm glad you enjoyed Sheldon so because TBH I was really intimidated at first when I realized I was doing this story his POV

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