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Fic: The Duplicity Hypothesis (1/3)

Jul 31, 2009 23:26

Title: The Blue Gingham Corollary
Author: MrsVC
WC: ~1,400
Rating: PG-13
AN: Dedication and special thanks to renisanz for reminding me to write, to fujiidom for making it actually worth reading, to arabian for the title and lovelessnoire for the beer and peanuts.

Written for Fiction Friday/Smutty Saturday: OTP challenge

Sheldon had always assumed that Penny's threat of going 'Junior ( Read more... )

fan: fiction, !parradox's pirracy prroject, community: challenges, rating: pg-13

Comments 37

arabian August 1 2009, 03:45:05 UTC

Loved this. It's absolutely gorgeous; and easily my favorite thing you've ever written. I would adore to see you continue this "universe" in other stories like this. Heck, you could do it with the remaining prompts!!! Yeah!! (Even the one that Sin wouldn't let me use :winkwink:) Going through my favorite parts ...

-- Raj had come in his normal sweater-vest but he noticed it had a dusky red and black desert motif across the bottom. Points for subtlety, Sheldon conceded. Howard was in a garish Turquoise cowboy outfit, complete with silver bangles on the white, fringed collar. --

Just such a lovely little touch. So Raj, so Howard, so Sheldon to note it all.

-- he dusted off his old plaid working shirts and jeans --

Gulp! Oh, to see Sheldon like this on the show. :drool:

-- Sheldon soon found himself so engrossed in the mathematics of the display before him ... I loved this whole bit; so in character that Sheldon would find himself drawn to the mathematics of it, and become so engrossed that he lost track of what is ( ... )

mrsvc August 1 2009, 03:53:42 UTC

Wow! I am so glad you liked it!
You know, I find Kaley is so beautiful that it was quite easy to write about the picture she creates. She's just too. freaking. gorgeous.
I am so very glad you liked it! Like, crazy insane glad you liked it! <3333
LOL, I can totes see Howard dressed like the Marlboro Man. He couldn't go to a rodeo any other way. XD
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY REVIEW.

elsiesnuffin August 1 2009, 03:58:02 UTC

Holy crap!

This is amazing. I love how subtle the entire thing is. It's all written almost lyrically too. Gorgeous. I could start quoting the parts that are my favorite, but I would basically be copying the entire thing.

Except to say that I LOVE LOVE LOVE him conceding to himself he understand why Leonard acts the way he does around her.

I vote for a series in this 'verse.

mrsvc August 1 2009, 04:01:40 UTC

OMG, thank you so much!
I am so glad you liked it!
<3333

Um, the entire series thing may occur if only because you have a cute Simon/Kaley icon.

elsiesnuffin August 1 2009, 04:05:15 UTC

Ooh, I knew it was gonna be good for something!

irrel August 1 2009, 04:07:06 UTC

I loved this a lot and now I have to see Sheldon dressed like that... it was all kinds of hot and nothing even happened between them. I ask for a sequel!

'hurry up, partner, we still got to marathon some Firefly before bed' This made me lol because I'm watching Firefly right now :P

mrsvc August 1 2009, 04:13:15 UTC

LOL, I'm not much for smut so I had to make it all ~subtle and ~contextual. ^_^

LOL, I saw that Tweet a moment ago and I was like, "LOL!"

I'm so glad you liked it!
Thank you so much!

gemsile123 August 1 2009, 04:09:51 UTC

This was amazingly well written (with just a few mistakes, but it's all good!) Texas!Sheldon is hot by definition, but I love the way you wrote him. Just enough description, just enough characterization :) Really good job!

I second the idea for a series :) Even just a sequel, pweeeease!

mrsvc August 1 2009, 04:26:08 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for the comment! <3

renisanz August 1 2009, 04:17:00 UTC

Yay! UST, ftw, indeed. I love how the boys are doing a whole 'nother kind of cosplay. Mmm...the image of Sheldon in cowboy duds, is nice. Almost fan art inspiring. :P

But really, I loved this. I like how you wrote the stirrings of attraction and arousal in Sheldon as if he were seeing Penny for the first time.

mrsvc August 1 2009, 04:28:05 UTC

Of course! Do you think they could go to the rodeo in anything but their Cowboy best? XD
On the mention of fanart, I do have a prize in the wings....*bribes you with the prospect of a sequel*

I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you for the comment!

renisanz August 1 2009, 04:57:23 UTC

Ok, reading everyone else's reviews I feel like I should have gushed a bit more over this, conveyed a little better how much I enjoyed this.

Especially this: Sheldon couldn't say anything to him tonight, couldn't rebuke him when he had been so carried away by his own feelings, something he had held careful reign over for so long. He pushed them back in light of Leonard's face, in the light of Leonard's hopes, because anything else would have been blasphemy indeed.

Wonderful, dear. :)