Comments | sheldon_penny: My First Fic!

qblackheart in sheldon_penny

My First Fic!

Jul 12, 2009 18:17

So, I finally figured this lj-cut thingie out (I think, because sometimes I'm completely clueless)! This is my first attempt at an S/P fic, so be gentle with me - although, I'm happy with any kind of feedback.
Mods: Hopefully, I've done this right. If not, please feel free to delete it. Cheers!

Title: The Intrinsic Happiness Quotient
Spoilers: ( Read more... )

fan: fiction, rating: r

Comments 28

irrel July 12 2009, 22:28:50 UTC

No worries, you posted it fine :)

Now off to read it~!

qblackheart July 12 2009, 22:34:41 UTC

Whew! Thanks!

rj_anderson July 12 2009, 22:39:15 UTC

Oh, YEAH. This is a great start -- I love how you kick us off with the status quo from the show (including some nice solid Leonard characterization, great to see him portrayed as the nice but somewhat clueless guy we know) and slowly start to introduce us to the idea that Penny might be more interested in Sheldon and vice versa than we've previously seen...

Looking forward to more!

qblackheart July 13 2009, 20:01:09 UTC

Yeah - I really wanted to read something that would pick up where the show left off and then I thought - well, I'll just write it myself!
Yeah I like my Leonard too :o)
Thanks for this!

artic_fox July 12 2009, 22:58:56 UTC

I'm enjoying this so far. I always enjoy fics that adhere to canon at first and then believably deviate, which it seems yours will. Great job, I look forward to more!

qblackheart July 13 2009, 20:01:32 UTC

Ditto :o) Thanks!

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qblackheart July 13 2009, 20:02:12 UTC

I know - it's the thrill of the chase I think. I need that slow build-up :o)

arabian July 12 2009, 23:44:43 UTC

I agree with the others; it's really in character and nice to see you staying true to form with the show as is before allowing for the build-up of Sheldon and Penny.

Great job so far. :)

qblackheart July 13 2009, 20:02:31 UTC

Thanks!