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"Black Waters," Chapter Thirteen

Sep 24, 2006 21:47

Title: "Black Waters"
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asecretkept September 25 2006, 03:03:38 UTC

I don't know whether to...well, I don't know how to react! Aughhhhhh...I need more! I loved the way you made Jack.

sheila_snow September 26 2006, 06:12:40 UTC

Sorry, getting a little bogged down in Real Life right now. I'll probably get the next chapter posted next weekend, but I can make no promises, I'm afraid!

Jack is having a little attack of the conscience right now -- either that, or he's behaving like a typical male, LOL! Good thing there's a voice of reason somewhere on that ship. ;)

Thanks for commenting!

starrdust411 September 25 2006, 03:37:38 UTC

Poooooooooor Jack! Poooooooooor Will! It seems that Anamaria is going to have to act as the voice of reason around here (as usual). Glad to see you updated! Can't wait for more :)

sheila_snow September 26 2006, 06:14:49 UTC

Hello, again!

Well, I did try to warn everyone about the gratuitous Will Turner abuse, but I guess I forgot to mention the corresponding Jack abuse. I'll try to play closer attention to my warnings next time...

Thanks so much for your continued support -- you're a trooper!

starrdust411 September 26 2006, 13:52:27 UTC

LOL. What can I say? You've got me hooked! :)

Yay!! New Chapter. anonymous September 25 2006, 08:16:14 UTC

Oh I am so excited that you updated. This story is very interesting and it draws you in. I can't wait for when the next chapter will come out, hopefully soon. *puppy dog eyes* Pretty please. lol. Again good job.

Re: Yay!! New Chapter. sheila_snow September 26 2006, 06:17:01 UTC

Throw in some *Will Turner eyes* and I might be more likely to write faster, LOL! Thanks for taking the time to comment -- I promise to update just as soon as I can...

Re: Yay!! New Chapter. anonymous September 28 2006, 04:47:55 UTC

Well I think I can beat even *Will Turner Eyes* with *Will Turner giving puppy dog eyes*
LOL. I hope that helps your writing.

Re: Yay!! New Chapter. sheila_snow September 28 2006, 07:05:37 UTC

Okay, okay, I give! If that doesn't help the writing, nothing will!

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haunted_pearls September 25 2006, 20:11:04 UTC

I love how Ana is all 'RAR, JACK BE DAMNED, WILL'S ILL!'
All of this chapter made me happy (in a twisted way), but that was the thing that made me most happy.

sheila_snow September 26 2006, 06:20:36 UTC

I adore the character of Anamaria -- she has her faults, but she seems to have her heart in the right place . . . eventually! She's also great fun to write, and you'll be seeing more of her, especially since she and Jack don't quite see eye-to-eye when it comes to one William Turner. Glad you enjoyed the chapter (twisted or not). Thanks!

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sheila_snow September 28 2006, 07:04:04 UTC

Thanks so much!

I'm trying, really trying for a happy ending, but I'll probably have to settle for "not an unhappy" ending, if that makes any sense! I think I've put the boys through too much to end things with complete sweetness and light. We'll see though. My muse has been known to change directions abruptly before!