Looking for Opinions...
Greetings~ Anyway, I did say I'd contribute, and I have been working on a fic. So far, I have about 6 drabbles from said fic, and it is to be expanded. It'll probably end up pretty frigging long. However, this is absolutely my first time writing fanfiction, and I'd like some opinions before I continue. What I've included here is the first three drabbles - 313 words worth. It's not heavily Link/Sheik, but it is there. And it will develop more fully further in.
The summary is as follows: Zelda and Sheik were the same person, but Zelda and Impa had combined their magic in order for Zelda to take on the form of a long-dead Sheikah. Ganondorf has been sealed away, and Zelda is planning to return Link to his own time. This fiction follows the thoughts of Zelda, Link, and Sheik - whose memory isn't quite willing to leave Zelda's mind.
So, what I'm asking for is if some of you could read what's here so far and let me know what you think? Try and guess who's who, lawl >_> Um... Thank you in advance ^^
Time. I should have known better than to play with it, to think it was what I should have done. Potentially, I jeopardised everyone involved by treating it so… Callously. But such a thing has passed now, and we can continue from where we left off. I have robbed you of seven years, and now must repay what was stolen. But some things I cannot repay, not now, not ever. Regrettable, but such things have passed. Time to move on. Time to flourish, to grow. Time to regain what was lost.
Even if not all can be regained. Such things have passed.
Seven years. Seven years I lay sleeping, dead to the world. Seven years, and in that time so much had happened. Seven years of my life stolen, and now to be repaid. Seven years of awakening, without being trapped in dreamless slumber. Seven years, with no need to rush, to cram such a period into a space of moments. Seven years, and at the end of it, no quest, no temples to be purged or evils to be shut away.
Seven years of freedom, finally repaid. Seven years, and at the end of it, no him.
Why? To save Hyrule. Of course, the greater good. Always the greater good. You take my spirit, my very being, use me as your mask. Just as he was your weapon, I became your defence. For seven years you hid within me. For seven years you used me to deceive everyone - the Black King, your people, and eventually him. I had no choice - not that I would have denied your wishes. I am a Sheikah, and the Royal Family’s desires come first, and that, perhaps unfortunately, included allowing you to wield my spirit as a shield.
Seven years you stole from him, and gave to me. All for the greater good. Always the greater good.
The summary is as follows: Zelda and Sheik were the same person, but Zelda and Impa had combined their magic in order for Zelda to take on the form of a long-dead Sheikah. Ganondorf has been sealed away, and Zelda is planning to return Link to his own time. This fiction follows the thoughts of Zelda, Link, and Sheik - whose memory isn't quite willing to leave Zelda's mind.
So, what I'm asking for is if some of you could read what's here so far and let me know what you think? Try and guess who's who, lawl >_> Um... Thank you in advance ^^
Time. I should have known better than to play with it, to think it was what I should have done. Potentially, I jeopardised everyone involved by treating it so… Callously. But such a thing has passed now, and we can continue from where we left off. I have robbed you of seven years, and now must repay what was stolen. But some things I cannot repay, not now, not ever. Regrettable, but such things have passed. Time to move on. Time to flourish, to grow. Time to regain what was lost.
Even if not all can be regained. Such things have passed.
Seven years. Seven years I lay sleeping, dead to the world. Seven years, and in that time so much had happened. Seven years of my life stolen, and now to be repaid. Seven years of awakening, without being trapped in dreamless slumber. Seven years, with no need to rush, to cram such a period into a space of moments. Seven years, and at the end of it, no quest, no temples to be purged or evils to be shut away.
Seven years of freedom, finally repaid. Seven years, and at the end of it, no him.
Why? To save Hyrule. Of course, the greater good. Always the greater good. You take my spirit, my very being, use me as your mask. Just as he was your weapon, I became your defence. For seven years you hid within me. For seven years you used me to deceive everyone - the Black King, your people, and eventually him. I had no choice - not that I would have denied your wishes. I am a Sheikah, and the Royal Family’s desires come first, and that, perhaps unfortunately, included allowing you to wield my spirit as a shield.
Seven years you stole from him, and gave to me. All for the greater good. Always the greater good.