The Last Note: Over

[sheerab]

Title: The Last Note
Genre: Romance {AU}, Drama.
Characters: Yoochun, Junsu, Changmin.
Pairing: Yoochun & Junsu
Rating: PG-13

Synopsis: Kim Junsu, a professor who has yet to turn twenty one, is being transferred to a new university, where he finds a music room on his first day after a conflict with a student. He begins to frequent the room to play

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[dongbangsuju20]

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He felt the painting slipping from his hands.

/

“CRASH!”

Junsu jumped when he heard the clatter, his hair standing on ends as a shiver was sent down his spine.

... this was the first moment where I almost died...
chunnie~ TT with the painting.. (yeah, I still think about this painting XD)

aaand about junsu's situation..
I first really thought he heard the crash of the accident with yoochun.. that he was in the near of it..
but after then it was sumthing else..
and i had to read it twice to understand this XD''

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He was welcoming his adulthood alone. Not with Yoochun whom he loved so much, not with Changmin who’d promised to bake him a cake, not with Eunhyuk who’d probably dare him to have sex on this day, not with friends who’d bombard him with presents and wishes, not with anyone, but himself.

really the part with eunhyuk and the sex shocked me a little bit.. because for me the two are just friends and nothing more..
but it is okay, because I know how you mean it..
aw~ óò
all alone is not good ._.
*hug junsu*

~

Until Park Yoochun came into his life, and stepped into his heart, and took away those shades, replacing them with stupid paper hearts.

And now, he felt only guilt and deepest regret. Why did he fall in love with Yoochun? Why did he let the other fall in love with him?! His own selfishness had hurt himself, worse still, hurt the man he loved the most.

the paper hearts are LOVE <3
and it was good that yoochun came into your life, junsu >-<
though you regret it now!
love is never wrong >-<
ah, i hate it when someone blames himself because of something that he couldn't be responsible for >.<

~

He wondered how many times he had cried himself to sleep till then.

Fourteen times. Since the start of December. God no, that’d be fifteen. No wonder he wasn’t a math teacher.

Blinking, he felt so lethargic. All he wanted to do now was rest in Yoochun’s embrace and go to sleep.

He was so fucking tired, of himself, of everything.

“Love… Bye, love,” he whispered as his eyes came to a shut-

/

-And everything turned pitch dark.

...
just crying T-T

you broke yoosu (for the moment! for~ the~ moment~!)
but you broke it .. and my heart with it T_T

and that Junsu cried every night.. omg T_T
*want to hug him*

and .. and... yoochun .___.
ah, i know he isn't dead..
(because if he would.. I would kill you ûu)
but .. but..
this is drama TT

love it.. but.. it hurts .__.

and you can write both drama and fluff so SO awesome TT
*envy*

have I said that i LOVE you?!
and this fanfic?!
and your YooSu?! TT
and your fluff and drama?!

i LOVE it.. <3333 T-T
...
waiting for the next chapter~
*crawl into bed and hide/snuggle into blankets*

btw:
i love how you bring the dbsk songs in this fanfic.. just had to say this XD'

[sheerab]

its really sweet of you to write long comments for every single chapter without fail. just to let you know that we REALLY REALLY appreciate it. but recently we're getting busier (damn school), so updates tend to be slower and replies may not be as long. sorry ): we love you still!

haha so did you cry?

HAHAHAH that mistake. oh well. we're becoming too muddled.
yah! changmin. is. mine. *snatches minnie back* go hide behind some pillar if you want. hahaha.
yeah, delete the 'and'. we'll edit it later haha. thanks for pointing it out.

'not with Eunhyuk who’d probably dare him to have sex on this day' -> as in dare junsu to lose his virginity on his birthday. with, whoever. not with eunhyuk (they'll never step over the line). too bad hyukkie doesnt know that yoochun already took junsu BEFORE his birthday~ oh well.

so. sorry for the late reply. we love you super much. you're awesome. thank you for everything. you rock. <3

[dongbangsuju20]

ah because i love every single chapter and enjoy it so much everytime <33
and because you love my comments I write them with even more happiness ^-^
i am always so glad when I see your replies <33

ah, i am busy with school too x-x
so no problem with this ^^
ah, and your replies ARE long <33 and wonderful **
hehe
i love you too <3

yeah T-T
ahhh, i love drama x3

ahh.. *hide behind yoosu*
soooo much better xPP
okaay XD
ah, you're welcome ^^

*lool*
that made me happy to hear -> "they'll never step over the line"
ah, for me yoosu is the OTP <33
*haha*
ah, i don't think it would be sooo good if hyukkie would know about it, maybe he would ask too much XDD

ahh, it wasn't late >.<
it was super fast ^-^
my~ comment was so late TT
i hadn't enough time all the time to write a looong comment so it took a little time untill you got your comment >-<
so sorry for this óò

hehe, thank you >//<
but you're even more awesome!
because YOU write this GREAT fanfic **
*loove*
thank you for this <3

[dongbangsuju20]

i want more TT
it had been so long since the last chapter came out..

i miss your fanfic and you ladies >-<<

ahh, come back T-T

[sheerab]

Ohno, sorry! We've been really busy because of school! X: We've been spending more than 14 hours in school recently so we apologise for not updating for so long!

[dongbangsuju20]

ah okay óò
just had to know that you still live >.<

i will wait patiently for the next chapter <3
though I miss you and the fanfic TT

i love you ladies~ <333
*wait for you*

BTW: i am really busy for school too, so I understand you very well ^^