White Collar fic - Can't Be Both (Chapter 6)

Dec 29, 2011 16:49


Title: Can’t Be Both (Chapter 6)
Author’s Name: sheenianni
Spoilers: Season 3.10 - Countdown
Characters/Pairings: Neal Caffrey, Peter Burke, Clinton Jones, Diana Barrigan, Elizabeth Burke, Sara Ellis, Agent Kramer, June and others
Raiting: PG
Warnings/Triggers: None
Word Count: ~ 3,000 (chapter), ~31,000 (total)
Summary: In the aftermath of Elizabeth’s kidnapping, ( Read more... )

white collar, 3.10 countdown, can't be both, character: kramer, character: neal caffrey, fanfiction

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sheenianni December 29 2011, 17:21:03 UTC
Realistic was kind of the point... though in the show, I hope for some happy resolution that will repair the Peter/Neal friendship and that won't send Neal to prison. (I even kind of hope that Mozzie could come back... long-term back, not just to help El. I'm curious what will happen in January).

I wouldn’t like a story where Neal wasn’t “Neal”. But he has grown a lot during this fic and even through Season 3. So, if you think the Neal in this story is still in character, then yes, Neal will still be Neal.
Of course he will be forced to adapt - but really, Neal’s ability to adapt is one of his biggest strengths. I’d bet you that even if he didn’t met June that first day in Pilot, he would have somehow managed to find a reasonably nice flat for the $700 - or he would have persuaded the hotel’s owners to renovate it. I don’t pretend to know how, but - he’s Neal. And he would still have his hat and his classical smile.
(Though I’m not saying Neal’s deal isn’t extremely restrictive, because it is. But if Neal has managed to retain his identity in prison, then he can do it even in these conditions.)

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wickhouse2005 December 29 2011, 23:04:56 UTC
Thank you for the well thought out reply. Neal is very adaptable and really almost anything is better then prison.

I really wish Season 3 hadn't gone the route that it did, it is very hard to see how Neal won't end up in prison and even saving El wouldn't be enough to salvage his friendship.

May be a more realistic view in how a CI relationship would work and it would be interesting in seeing Neal work with/around someone harder then Peter.

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