Comments | sheelock: O Brother Where Art Thou?

sheelock

O Brother Where Art Thou?

Oct 27, 2007 20:12

Here's the latest update on my tale of two brothers. I am not a nurse, doctor or any other kind of medical personnel so any medical mistakes are all mine.
Don't own anything OC.

The cab had barely come to a stop when Seth jumped out followed quickly by Kirsten and Sandy. They had already decided that Seth and Kirsten would go immediately to the ( Read more... )

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fredsmith518 October 28 2007, 08:21:48 UTC

“You have to take Ryan back to Newport with you.”... “That’s what we want for Ryan also. But he has to want it as well. We can’t force him to come home just to have him leave again.”
very much like this exchange between Trey and Ryan and Kirsten's later support of Trey.

Very sweet last line also.
Delighted to see this updated:)

sheelock October 30 2007, 18:17:36 UTC

Glad you like the last line (stole it from episode 407).

fifimom October 28 2007, 10:21:36 UTC

With his big brother around Ryan really seems younger, like the little brother. It's nice reading Trey acting the part he was born to be. I'm glad he got Ryan to understand the Cohens had the right to be at the hospital and even happier when Ryan realized he wanted them there. Thanks for the great update.

sheelock October 30 2007, 18:20:19 UTC

I felt that with such a crisis in Ryan's life (Marissa's death) that he would want to go back to his roots and Trey, try to forget Newport ever happened. And the family dynamic is always there - whenever families get together even adults revert to their family positions. Glad you enjoyed.

ryanforever October 28 2007, 22:13:46 UTC

I'll be interested to see how Ryan responds now.

I don't want Trey to push him away eventhough he knows that Ryan would be better off with the Cohen's.

Hopefully, in his weakened state, he'll stop fighting then and let them love him as they want to.

sheelock October 30 2007, 18:21:42 UTC

I had a clear idea where this was going and then this update kind of took off on its own. Right now Trey is thinking that he may have to push Ryan away but we'll see.

60schic October 29 2007, 23:10:30 UTC

*sigh* I'm always happy to see an update of this story. You're teasing us with the pacing! But we're one step closer to a safe Ryan...right?

sheelock October 30 2007, 18:22:33 UTC

Hopefully on his way to a safe and happy Ryan!

ocmiss October 30 2007, 20:08:43 UTC

Ah, that's a really great story.
I really love your Trey trying to be a good big brother to Ryan...

But, I don't like the Ryan being hurt, hope he'll be all okay.

sheelock November 1 2007, 16:53:51 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it - always wanted more interaction between Trey and Ryan after season 2 so I wrote my own.