I see what you don't

[lost4eturnity]

So I'm new to this community, and I pretty much think that most of your writting is kick ass. I'll post one of my old poems I wrote about 4 years ago..I hope that at least someone will be impressed...(None of my poems rymne by the way).

I see what you dont
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I see people threatening
To pull out the gun
To pull that trigger

I see people wanting to die
To get rid of the pain
To get rid of the hurt

I see people slitting their wrists
To relieve their problems
To forget their pains

I see people walking on the edge of life
To fall and fall again
To do just as they have to and not care

I see people using drugs
To relieve stress
To get that high

I see people dieing
To get away
To leave the pain of life

I see what you don’t,
This is written to a world of pain,
To a life that isn’t seen worth living.