Sleeping Sand, Silent Cloud, John/Paul, PG-13

Aug 19, 2006 16:54

Title: Sleeping Sand, Silent Cloud
Pairing: John/Paul
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2921
Notes: Whoa, two fics completed in one day! And I finally managed to finish a J/P after picking at about a dozen of them since May. So that's exciting. It feels a little OOC at times, and it refused to stay in one POV, but it's done. I'll take it. ETA: I've ( Read more... )

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sgt_pepper55 August 19 2006, 21:43:17 UTC
ooooooooh! I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!! MORE!! Please!

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she_had_to_go August 19 2006, 21:51:17 UTC
Hahaha awww thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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ex_artbox613 August 19 2006, 21:45:07 UTC
You win. So beautifully written. *mems*

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she_had_to_go August 19 2006, 21:51:58 UTC
Oh, wow! I've won! *dances* It's been a while since I've won. It feels nice. XD

Thank you so much!

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oh_johnny_ August 19 2006, 22:13:47 UTC
This is really good. Really, really good. I love the way you brought in real details very naturally. And I really love the image of drunk John standing fully dressed in the shower :-)

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she_had_to_go August 19 2006, 22:38:47 UTC
Thank you! That really means a lot to me coming from you. I love your writing (which you probably would never know because I'm shite at commenting on the things that I read). So thank you so much for reading!

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whatnow8731 August 19 2006, 22:30:49 UTC
yeah this was great!! I love this kinda stuff. More please!!!

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she_had_to_go August 19 2006, 22:37:09 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully, I'll be able to finish another soon.

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she_had_to_go August 19 2006, 23:13:17 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

I've got a few others I'm working that hopefully I'll be able to finish soon.

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