Comments | she_burns1: fic: you don't have to put on the red light, part 3

she_burns1

fic: you don't have to put on the red light, part 3

Feb 20, 2009 09:39

Title: you don't have to put on the red light
Part 3: meeting
Author: she_burns1
Pairing: Bret/Jemaine, mentions of possible Murray/Jim?! What?!
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bret hires Jemaine to be his ‘companion’.
Disclaimer: I do not owns the ‘Flight of the Conchords’ or anything connected with them.
Spoilers: Through SS2 ‘A New Cup’, some references ( Read more... )

fotc, fotc: bret/jemaine

Comments 23

baracknophobia February 20 2009, 18:30:05 UTC

'Whatchoo talkin' 'bout, Willis.' is something I would definitely love to hear Bret say.

The buildup to the rest of the fic is killing me. So much tension! I'd have to second the idea of hairporn, or ANY PORN! PLEASE?

I love this.

she_burns1 February 25 2009, 03:24:01 UTC

Trust me, there will be porn! But I'm building up to it - to kill you - tension killings! Mwhahaha!

Seriously though, thanks for the feedback! :))

postal152 February 20 2009, 19:08:51 UTC

Ahaha, your Murray voice is fabulous!! Actually, all of your voices are fabulous, but Murray was especially so this part. The harp thing - LOL.

And yeah, like everyone else, I'm kind of dying. Take your time writing, of course, but just know that with every hour that goes by without more of this story, a little bit of my soul is draining away.

she_burns1 February 25 2009, 03:25:52 UTC

Well, I don't want your soul to drain away, but suspense is good for you! And I was pretty proud of how Murray turned out here - I almost never give myself compliments - especially when it comes to writing - but this time I feel I did pretty durn good.

Thanks for the love!♥

xxsmoothopexx February 20 2009, 20:44:41 UTC

Murray was so spot on!
I'd love to hear him actually say any of the phrases, or all of them -- doesn't matter, really.

lye February 20 2009, 20:46:17 UTC

I think this band meeting may be the funniest thing I've ever read. 'May the force be in you?' HAHA, holy cow. I'm loving this.

she_burns1 February 25 2009, 03:26:23 UTC

♥ I'm loving you! ♥

gwyneth86 February 20 2009, 21:30:20 UTC

Dang! It gets better every fic. And I have to echo everybody else and say that your voices are soooo dead on, especially Murray. The whole beginning was fabulous.

gwyneth86 February 20 2009, 21:30:42 UTC

Urgh, I meant to say it gets better every chapter, not fic.