Fic: Never Did Run Smooth, Part 4/4

[she_burns1]

Never Did Run Smooth
Part 4/4
Pairing(s) in the story: Jemaine/Bret (Flight of the Conchords)
Author Name/Pen Name: she_burns1
Beta: lordstarfish
Disclaimer: I do not own Flight of the Conchords, or Hbo, or Bret, or Jemaine…though I will glad take donations of Bret/Jemaine!
Rating of story: PG
Word Count: 3,090
Brief summary: The course of true love never

Comments

[lordstarfish]

My goodness, that was fast! :O

[she_burns1]

lol - told you I was excited!!! I hope to have the next bits off to you to edit soon - just tweaking it a bit - want it to be perfect!! O_O

[freckled_kisses]

soo...there's gonna be a 5/4?? :DD

[she_burns1]

lol - more like another sequel - then I can have a trilogy! Like 'Star Wars' or 'X-Men' or other over-inflated things!! O_o
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I wish I could capture what I want in one shot - like 'Stardust' or 'Sense and Sensibility' or some other respectable movie/book things!

[lye]

THIS BREAKS MY HEART! It is wonderful, as usual! I really like happy endings that aren't so happy. More realistic, and stuff. But guh, this just tears my heart out.

I am jealous at your ability to pump out the fics!

[she_burns1]

I tried to make it realistic but it's a fine line, as FOTC isn't all about the drama. I pump out fics quick because I have nothing else to do - so really you should feel sorry for me more than anything - lol, but thanks and I am glad you enjoyed it!!! :D

[ballroombubble]

I cried :'(

I am too emotionally invested in your fictionalised versions of Bret and Jemaine!

[she_burns1]

I'm sorry I made you cry, love!! Cheer up - still one whole volume (as it were) to go!

[girlofjuly]

Oh, I was so excited when I saw this on my flist, and now I am speechless. I'll leave you a better comment this afternoon, but oh my god, I loved this. Probably a lot more than I should love a fic, but there you go.

[she_burns1]

but oh my god, I loved this. Probably a lot more than I should love a fic, but there you go.

This may be some of the best feedback EVER!!! Now I am the one who is speechless - with LOVE!!! *_*

[girlofjuly]

Aww, well. You're my favorite writer in this fandom and I can't wait to read more from you ♥

[she_burns1]

Ok, so I lied, because now this is the best feedback ever. I want to plate it in gold!!

T__T

[beansidhe_baby]

I'm actually crying now. I hope you're satisfied!

This fic really cut me hard and deep all the way throughout. It really relates to a situation I went through recently. It also involved redefinitions and misunderstandings of sexuality, friendships and kisses that had seemed like a good idea at the time but ultimately hurt both of us. I didn't get a happy ending, lets leave it at that.

I'm going to scurry off and write something cute and fluffy to cheer myself up now. *sobs*

Re: T__T

[she_burns1]

Well, as a writer I'm glad to get an emotional response but I DO feel bad for making you cry!

I didn't ever really go through a situation like this - a lot of people I know have though, so I drew from that! I am sorry you had such an experience!

If it makes you feel any better the next leg should be more...heartwarming? ;)

Re: T__T

[beansidhe_baby]

Don't feel sorry. The feelings were going to come out sooner or later. I'm glad they came out over a well written fic rather than when watching a rom-com with friends/family. And this saga of yours is really an achievement and I'm so glad that you're sharing it :)

Re: T__T

[freckled_kisses]

*hugs*