Title: I Thought I Don't Want You
Author: Shattered Tenshi
Fandom: JE, KAT-TUN
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst...kinda?
Pairing/Characters: Akame and something else
Warnings: Real Person Slash
Summary: Unbeta-ed. Companion fic to
I Thought I Don't Need You.
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Gah... )
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I wonder they will patch up n be together..
arigato for the fic..
can't wait for the next up for it..
ganbantte ne..
sore ja..
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Hmm... if you want to know what might be wrong with the fic.. all I can say is that maybe it's a bit rushed, especially right after Jin saw the Maru & Kame scene. I mean you could've dragged on a bit more there about Jin's feelings but very soon Ueda called and there was a solution right away.. I think the flow would've been better if you described that one part more because that's actually the point when people (like me xD) start to feel sad for how what Jin saw made things even worse~
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Akame fluff is hard, too. Because of all the history between them...*sighs* Boys.
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I like this fic.. ^_^
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