Comments | shatteredlens: Neck Accoutrement project: Shoot #5

shatteredlens

Neck Accoutrement project: Shoot #5 - Finished?

Jun 13, 2006 10:14

Ok, I think I have it and managed to make it a quad. Only one features Za. I was tossed about whether or not she should be in more, but none of the others worked as well as this one and I think serves well as the final block to create the most amount of doubt.

Anyway, would love to hear everyone’s thoughts.

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crazyzim June 13 2006, 14:50:53 UTC

i love it this way. now that i look at it again, i see how longingly she's looking at the dog, it really does seem very doubtful -- these are really great and i love the layout

shatteredlens June 13 2006, 14:53:16 UTC

Oh yeah! That makes me feel good to hear that. Maybe it also comes off differently now that it’s laid out with the others? Provides more of a dialogue almost? Just thoughts.

paintwithlight June 13 2006, 16:28:42 UTC

The four work well together. I might be tempted to play with the order, but what you've done is good.

Lucky for the model that Za is so well behaved. My beast would have leaped up on the chair, knocked it over and brought the photo session to a gruesome end. ;-)

shatteredlens June 13 2006, 16:44:13 UTC

She's only well behaved because she new there were treats involved ;-) Also, she's only 5lbs, so it's not like she can do much to influence the situation :D

belimah June 13 2006, 17:03:33 UTC

Oh! I didn't realize how this was to be displayed. Now that I see it, there is something I think *really* works to the advantage of your goal... it's the drastically different angles between them, especially the top two.

shatteredlens June 13 2006, 17:49:06 UTC

Interesting that out of all the elements that's what you thinks help reach the goal most. Iiiiiiiintersting.

belimah June 13 2006, 18:17:59 UTC

It is because, as I saw them before, I did not find conflict to be self-evident. She just looked terribly sad in varying extents and determined to do the deed. The angles force a more obvious conflict, in my head, as it forces me to see there are multiple, conflicting perspectives. And I think that's just swell. :)

shatteredlens June 13 2006, 18:19:11 UTC

Neet! And you used the word swell :D

papavic June 13 2006, 23:22:08 UTC

busted link

shatteredlens June 14 2006, 01:09:18 UTC

Hmm, that's odd. I hadn't touched it and it was showing up before. Well, it's showing up now anyway.

papavic June 14 2006, 01:22:12 UTC

works now