House/Cameron birthday fic

Nov 15, 2007 20:43

Title: Crossing the Line
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athousandsmiles November 16 2007, 02:48:55 UTC
Amazing and beautiful. Angsty and hot. And that lovely, wonderful, hopeful ending. Perfect.

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 03:00:09 UTC
So glad you liked it!

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cozy_cupcake November 16 2007, 02:55:09 UTC
posted early with her permission to break the evil curse. :-)

This made me laugh. Thank you for posting early and writing this fic for my birthday. It means a lot. *hugs*

Okay, wow. It was tense and so them. This push and pull they have in their quasi relationship.

His duty was to the living.

This was perfect House. He distances himself from the patients and his only obligation is to cure them at the moments they are with him. Beyond that he couldn't care less. I think somewhere deep down he might but he gets hurt when he cares for too long.

He sleeps better at night. He shouldn’t.
Love that you brought the old school, good times back.

Man plans and God laughs.I've never heard this. I like it ( ... )

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 03:07:29 UTC
Happy Birthday Sweets! I'm glad you like this! You did make me laugh when you offered to beta, not knowing it was for you. Hee.

Man plans and God laughs.

I figured it's something that Wilson might have mentioned at some time in the past. (This proverb actually rhymes in Yiddish.)

About oral sex...you're right, there's nothing anyone can say that won't get them in trouble. ;-)

I kinda liked the idea of House teaching by fucking. LOL

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cozy_cupcake November 16 2007, 03:12:01 UTC
You did make me laugh when you offered to beta, not knowing it was for you. Hee.
That made me laugh too.

I could see Wilson teaching House some Yiddish.

About oral sex...you're right, there's nothing anyone can say that won't get them in trouble. ;-)
LOL! I don't think there is. Foot always ends up in mouth.

I kinda liked the idea of House teaching by fucking. LOL

I would sign up SO fast!

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 03:09:08 UTC
Thanks so much, Jo! It was a bit trickier than I imagined to get the tone but I'm glad it all worked out.

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 03:52:13 UTC
Thank you SO MUCH for your help! You really helped me nail the motivation on both sides.

*throws flowers at your feet*

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 04:43:46 UTC
Sure, send it my way and tell me what you want me to look for. Also, I might not be able to get it back to you for 24 hours since it's almost midnight here.

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psyche_cuore November 16 2007, 03:50:34 UTC
The imagery in this, the depth of emotion in the whole thing, was just amazing.

He wanted her distracted while her heart caught up to necessity, using his body as the epidural.

Loved that line.

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sharp2799 November 16 2007, 04:12:41 UTC
*whispers* That's one of my favorite lines too.

I'm glad you liked it!

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