Comments | sharlot1926: j'adoube: Hanging Pawns (chapter 5)

sharlot1926

j'adoube: Hanging Pawns (chapter 5)

Mar 01, 2015 08:04

"So, Mace's eyes go big as saucers, right? But she's mad, too…fiery mad and shaking, about to explode like a mushroom cloud, and she goes, ‘I'm Princess Jasmine, now take it back and say you're sorry!' and I'm all, like…"( Read more... )

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tifaching March 2 2015, 03:04:15 UTC

Hah, I've been waiting for this (or something like it.) You and your damned cliffhangers!

Still keeping me on the edge of my seat with this one. As per usual, can't wait to see what happens next!

sharlot1926 March 2 2015, 03:27:13 UTC

You made me giggle. Yeah, I remember when I was writing this, I was wondering where all my cliffies had gone. I found a couple here towards the end. ;)

Thank you a million times over.

Kat

jpgr March 2 2015, 17:28:04 UTC

I looked last night but I guess I was too early.

I love the boys having time together as boys if not brothers. Will/Dean is still the older brother no mater if the younger is a brother or sister and does just what the older should. Now what's gonna happen in the desert?

sharlot1926 March 3 2015, 03:19:43 UTC

Aw, yeah...I think Brian was late getting it out. Slow poke. I'll whoop him good next time. ;)

Yes, I agree...Dean is a big brother through and through...that will definitely come into play next chapter...you know...when things get really bad. ;)

Thanks hon. I appreciate your encouragement!

Kat

amypond45 March 2 2015, 19:38:13 UTC

Wow! The wonderful bonding going on between Will and Sam is a thing of real beauty. And then the fire! Wow! I'm on my lunch hour reading this and I'm supposed to go back to work but I had to make sure they got out!

Thank you for this :)

sharlot1926 March 3 2015, 03:21:54 UTC

Sam and Dean were so cute together. Even though things are funky for them right now, I think this is more "brother" time than they've had in an while, you know? I think both boys are affected by it.

Hah! Be careful clocking back in from lunch! Tell your boss I said it's all okay. If she/he has a problem...you have her/him give me a call! ;)

Thanks much, amy. I appreciate it!

Kat

mdlaw March 3 2015, 02:05:39 UTC

Arrrgggghhhhhh!!!!!!!!! /0\ m

sharlot1926 March 3 2015, 03:22:18 UTC

D'awwwwww! /pats you gently!

:)

Kat

taylorariel March 3 2015, 03:07:11 UTC

Excellent Chapter!!! Loved the way Sam and Will/Dean bonded. And-when it counted most- Dean came through for Sam just like he always does.
Of course now they have no water or food or shelter and they are stuck in the desert.....but I have confidence in them. And John will eventually be there.
I look forward to your next chapter. Thank You.

sharlot1926 March 3 2015, 03:23:59 UTC

Yes...Dean can't let anything bad happen to Sam...that's not written in his memories...that's part of the fabric of his DNA, I think. Nothing anyone can do to stop that.

Things will definitely get worse before they get better. Two more chapters and this puppy will be put to bed! Thanks so much for your lovely comments.

Kat