jai guru deva om: Jai Guru Deva Om (chapter 13)

Oct 16, 2013 19:43


"Put the damn food in your mouth and chew, Dean"
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frostfalcon October 17 2013, 00:36:09 UTC
and poor Dean takes one for the team again... he just can't catch a break can he?

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sharlot1926 October 17 2013, 13:35:21 UTC
Luck really doesn't seem to be on his side, does it? Poor baby! Don't worry...he'll be fine. He HAS to be? Who else am I gonna torture in my next story? ;)

Thanks much frostfalcon!

Kat

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arliss October 17 2013, 19:10:40 UTC
Oh, such suspense. You really had me as to whether they were going to be in time to save the ones still living and release the ones Father had previously consumed. But yay! No more feasting! Dean's gone a long way to redeem himself in John's eyes, and John has some guilt to bear, now, too.

Such good work. Thank you!

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sharlot1926 October 18 2013, 01:39:11 UTC
Howdy arliss! OooOo! I like your avatar!

Yes...John is going to have a whole new perspective, I think. Let's hope he doesn't eff things up now. He has a golden opportunity to be there for his son and help him heal like he should have done back when he first got hurt on the salt-and-burn.

Here's to hoping he'll get it all together. Dean really needs him.

Thanks so much for the comment, arliss. :) Have a great weekend.

Kat

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jj1564 October 17 2013, 20:51:33 UTC
"He still got you in the end, though, didn't he?" John thoughtlessly threw the words out as he studied the map. Mei shifted in her seat and cleared her throat, glancing from a crushed Dean to an oblivious John.

I read this and HATED John so much, he had no idea what suffering Dean had been through (including his excruciating 12 days in the kiln) & I wanted John to suffer and fall under Fathers spell. And you did it, you put John under Fathers spell and showed how strong Dean is, even though the poor lamb is wounded again. Thank you so much!

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sharlot1926 October 18 2013, 01:41:07 UTC
Yep, yep...John got a first-hand experience and found that he wasn't any better at fending off Father's magic than Dean was. Hopefully this has been a humbling experience for John. He needs to strap on his big-boy pants and be the father that Dean needs.

Thanks so much for the comment, jj. I appreciate it!

Kat

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inanna_maat October 17 2013, 21:48:35 UTC
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it... the monster is devious and it could change John!!! Ah, Dean has all his wounds, isn´t he?

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sharlot1926 October 18 2013, 01:43:13 UTC
Yep...John was just as susceptible to Father's magic as Dean was. More, actually...since John didn't even try to put up a fight. Heh. Let's see what he does with this new information. He needs to take a good, long look in the mirror and face up to the part he played in this mess. And he only has ONE more chapter to do it in. Hee!

Thanks heaps, inanna. Have an awesome weekend.

Kat

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etoile444 October 17 2013, 22:54:22 UTC
Yay! I just knew Dean would get the kill and release the souls. I like the irony that he is again with the same injury that brought him to this town to begin with!

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sharlot1926 October 18 2013, 01:44:54 UTC
Hah! Right? Poor Dean...he left The Kindred in the same shape he arrived. Poor thing! But the monster is dead and hopefully he'll have a humbled John to help him get back on his feet. We'll see!

Thanks for the sweet comment. :)

Kat

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