(no subject)

[sharkgirlgoo]

I meet your proposition
With opposition
You told me you would take your love away
You told me you wouldn't care either way

It was a part your plan
To make me care for this man
A man of imaginative creation
A mystical demon, an angelic relic of forever

You meet my opposition
with rage and forceful caresses
with wishful think that there would be another day
with painful cries, you arised

It was a part of your plan
To make me love this man
A man of imaginative creation
A mystical demon, an angelic relic of forever

You arose
and fell quickly with unintentional surprise
Your caresses became chants of sorrowful mourning
And you thought

It was all a part of the plan
to create a gentle loving man
A man imaginative creation
A mystical fiend,of angelic aura

And I thought
without emotion
for I was emotional absent
for a extended time

It was a part of your plan
To make me love this man
A man of imaginative creation
A mystical demon, an angelic relic of forever

What do you think? I would like to have some comments about this piece.harsh criticism is welcomed.