mischief managed

[shanwens]

chen/sehun as hp's harry/draco ; ~3600 words ; pg
selected+fictional scenes from harry potter (yes some of the actual plot). this isn't a story about love, but it isn't quite about hate.
um i'm self-indulgent trash.. sechen drarry trash.. yes goodbye i'm sorry this is terrible!! aagh it probably won't make much sense if you haven't read the books

Comments

[verisatum]

IT WAS SO PERFECT AND THEN YOU STARTED A SENTENCE WITH A CONJUNCTION AND A TEAR LITERALLY FELL DOWN MY FACE. Like nooooooooooo

In all seriousness, I usually am turned off by the no capitalization things, yet for this fic (and in Will Grayson, Will Grayson), it seemed to work out pretty well. However, it does make longer sentences seem more like run-ons, so be careful.

It fit pretty well. I would never suggest Jongdae as Harry, but I actually really liked it. You surprised me quite a bit with this.

Sehun is always Malfoy. That's just a constant throughout most hp!exo fics. I would like to see more variation, if I'm being honest, but I'm content with my favourite white-haired pixie to be my favourite white-haired ferret.

I looooooove your use of action verbs. Stay that way forever.

I think that's it?

Oh right, are you thinking of a sequel at all?

Also, can we be friends?

Have a fabulous day <3

[shanwens]

aha i use a lot of conjunctions at the beginnings of sentences sometimes bc i try to make it sound more natural and sometimes bc i'm just lazy.. i just use lapslock because i think it looks nicer haha... in this case there's no actual stylistic purpose behind it. run-ons...... yea it's been a long time since i cared about those honestly i just write and get too lazy to edit i don't try pretend this is great lmao
but thank you for the feedback!! i rarely get detailed feedback so this is really nice aha
i'm thinking abt writing actual drarry in the future but sechen as drarry is more work.. i wouldn't do a sequel but i might do a continuation of this au with these characters but idk... i'm just lazy in general
why would i say no to a friend? :')

[verisatum]

I guess I just try way too hard with my writing then, it makes your work seem effortlessly amazing. I'm lazy about everything except for writing, besides the fact that I'm a) a lousy writer who just writes femslash and angst and CANNOT write fluff to save their life, and b) a total procrastinator. I swear I'll post a fic someday.
Yay friends c: hello im shea nice to meetcha

[bokudesu]

SCREAMSSSSSSSSSSS
ok ok smirking sehun is always a plus
CHANYEOL AND KYUNGSOO HELLO
anti-chen buttons omfg but i wish the "oh sehun stinks" change worked
poor joonmyun
silver.........robes............breathes heavily
why is oh sehun so sad :c is it his luv for jongdae
i know i was an asshole. frankly, i still am one. always
why do i keep thinking about you OuO bless
HAND HOLDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ON ASTRONOMY TOWER!!! i am so

sighs SIGHS /rolls down stairs
ily
sechen drarry Amazing
SEHUN MALFOY AND CHEN POTTER AMAZING
do not be ashamed and let us embrace this beautiful piece together
<3____<3

[shanwens]

the color silver is so!!!! and sehun is so!!!
(malf)o(y)h sehun is sad bc...... u need 2 finish reading the books lisa

[bokudesu]

i wish i had time to finish reading them ;_______;

sehun_wheeling_out_cake_for_chen_hyung.gif
happy birthday chen to my sehun

[taochens]

brb bucket of tears

[shanwens]

omg don't cry!!!!!!! thank you for reading and commenting <3

[cloudling]

huehue

[shanwens]

hihi

[alexa31]

I love this, I can't tell you how many time I've read it and I can't believe I never commented on it! It's beautiful. Honestly, I keep reading it again and again. Are you still planning on writing more to this? (read previous comments) Because this au is stunning. And their characters are stunning and so on par. But even if you're not, I still feel so blessed to be able to read this time and time again. Wonderful work, really!