Fic: Your Heart is My Home 2/4

[shangrilove]

Title: Your Heart is My Home 2/4
Fandom: Football RPF
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Juan Mata
Rating: PG
Word Count: 5105
Disclaimer: These boys, and Leo and Nora, I sincerely wish.
Notes This was supposed to be my holidays chapter, but hey at least I still got it out in Jan. So much thanks to the impeccable mardemaravilla or the beta. Part 1 can be

Comments

[jumping_down]

Beautiful, worth the wait. ♥

I love this image of Juan: "He tries to keep busy with trivial tasks, like organizing Nora’s doll collection or trying new puree recipes for Leo," laughed my ass off, hahaha. And the other images like him making airplane sounds or dropping Leo on Fernando's lap when he's wallowing. I know it's impossible to recap all their encounters so these tiny flashbacks are lovely.

Also, again, this still has that quiet sadness from the previous chapter but it's so heartwarming. I like how the two boys are growing together, and Fernando's parents taking them as a unit. Awww, and that last scene with Fernando pissed that Juan was missing. I can't wait to read more!

[shangrilove]

Nobody has guessed Juan's secret, not even my beta. :( I feel like I'm being a little too dodgy with my writing.

[jumping_down]

It's ok, understandable to keep deep dark secrets, not just from Fernando but from readers too. :)

[jumping_down]

Ultimate OTP: Juan/London

[shangrilove]

Nando/Freckles is my OTP.