[FMA fic] 25 Themes: All That You Need

[shamera]

....*hates on* Well, at least I wrote something, ne? >__> Even though it's not a good something by any stretch of the imagination. *tosses it out, and continues to class- where she should have been studying for her history midterms.*

25 Themes:All that You Need

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[shamera]

Danke~ X3

Although... second POV is really hard to write at first, but disturbingly easy after a few paragraphs. >__> I think it's my tense that I can't catch, though. I slip into past-tense even when I'm trying to write things in present tense. >_<

[uninformed]

I love second person so much. So much.

Al taking care of Ed is one of my favourite things ever. Because, really, Ed needs taken care of (he's like that, as you've nicely demonstrated)

The not-quite facial expressions are lovely too. His little smiling noise and all ^_^

♥