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Not Me (Community fic)

Feb 25, 2012 23:38

Title: Not Me (1/1)
Author: sinecure - My master fic list
Character/Pairing: Jeff, Britta, Annie
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,167
Genre: Gen, slight smutty times, romance... ish.
Spoilers: Epidemiology
Summary: Britta and Jeff meet in the bathroom during the Halloween party.
Disclaimer: I don't own Community and I make no money off of it.

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Comments 20

na_thalia February 26 2012, 07:01:46 UTC

... You almost wrote zombie smut.

I think it says more about me than you that I'm disappointed that you didn't continue that scene. Apparently, Jeff and Annie are A++ in any context for me ;->

Very cute!

sinecure February 26 2012, 07:10:59 UTC

I... I know! I don't even. It just... happened. I'm sorry I made you crave zombie smut?

I was watching Epidemiology today and Jeff's uncaring attitude toward everyone in this episode really annoys me and feels OOC. I think that's where this sprang from.

Thanks! And thank for not coming after me with a pitchfork! :)

na_thalia February 26 2012, 13:53:12 UTC

Okay, so for real, I love zombies. I mean, given the choice between zombies and vampires or werewolf-themed material, I'm a zombie girl in a zombie world. Life's fantastic! (I watch The Walking Dead, okay? And I'm currently reading Pride and Prejudice and Zombies.) I'm pretty sure I just never considered zombie smut before but like zombies don't realize they're dead when they start craving human flesh... It's real, it's here, and it's happening now. (What have you done to me?!?)

Also, crazy! Because I was watching Epidemiology last night too! I think if you focus on Jeff wanting to look cool, even as a zombie, than it makes sense? But yeah, his uncaring attitude didn't ring true. He didn't even flinch when Annie got eaten, he left Shirley and Chang... I guess he did that in the first paintball ep too, though?

I like your way of resolving it anyway!

... If you end up writing zombie smut, I wouldn't necessarily complain. (I might hate myself but complain? No! Not I...)

sinecure February 27 2012, 05:16:54 UTC

I love me some zombies too. Love, love them. Which is why Epidemiology is one of my top five fave episodes of Community. So much love. I watch The Walking Dead too. Although I'm a few episodes behind because I DVR them and watch a few at a time. I've also read all the graphic novels. So much awesome ( ... )

Thread 11

classicfreak February 26 2012, 07:05:45 UTC

Aguah ... buuh ... and the ... what?
WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?

sinecure February 26 2012, 07:12:40 UTC

I know, right?! It... happened. Let's never speak of this again? Or something.

My evil plan to get everyone to crave zombie smut is coming along beautifully!

crittab February 26 2012, 18:09:20 UTC

Whoa! Zombie (almost) smut... and I thought my fics were occasionally out there.

You win the world.

sinecure February 27 2012, 05:18:25 UTC

Right?! Out of nowhere.

Hee. I've done a Doctor/TARDIS smut fic, and now a zombie smut fic, I think I've gone as wacky as I possibly can and there is no more wacky to go.

Why, thank you! I've always wanted to own the world. I promise to only tarnish it a little.

teruel_a_witch February 27 2012, 14:57:11 UTC

This fic deserves two separate comments because because of two different parts.

First. Love this spin, I've always gotten such a J/B feeling from that episode, even when it first aired (the Jeff feeding Britta part especially felt too couply for my comfort) and we didn't know about the hook ups, so it was never my favourite to rewatch, and Paradigms reveal ruined it some more, so thanks for giving it a J/A spin. I totally can get behind that, I've also come to a sad conclusion that I only genuinely like Britta when she is being written by J/A shippers, I wish she were that wise on the show.

Second. Wha...What did I just read,lol, you do have the ability to surprise me,haha, I thought Doctor/TARDIS smut was the weirdest thing I've ever read until now. Totally gives the line "men are monsters who crave young flesh" a whole new meaning, also, to a line from the popular song to vid J/A to "take a bite of my heart" *gg*

teruel_a_witch February 27 2012, 15:14:06 UTC

Also, totally agree with you on sucky Jeff characterization in this episode, you could have chucked it up to every man for himself in a life-o-death situation but Abed sacrificed himself to get Troy to the end and Troy couldn't resist Abed even in zombie form, and we have Jeff, who is usually overprotective of Annie before he even thinks it through (like with Chang, he was soo blinded by that instinct to protect her he busted the door and after the door is busted his crazy eyes search the room before he settles on Annie and Chang somewhat sanely, that's how powerful the urge to protect her is in Jeff, he can't even calm down right away) yet in this episode he could care less, not even a "noo" when Annie was taken while he was screaming about his precious jacket. I know it was for laughs but you shouldn't sacrifice characterization for laughs.

sinecure March 2 2012, 06:08:17 UTC

Agreed. That's the big reason I wanted to write a fic afterward where one or more of them start to remember snatches of the night. I did that Missing Moments drabble, but it's still unsatisfying for me.

nyclove3 February 27 2012, 19:07:08 UTC

sinecure March 2 2012, 06:12:56 UTC

Yeah, I kind of weirded myself out a bit with the zombie lovin'. Well, the zombie love bites. I needed something to temper Jeff's extreme uncaring attitude about every single person in that group, who possibly is being killed/dying. That's always bothered me. I know it's for laughs, but I think Jeff was way past being that uncaring.

So, in my mind, his base instincts led him to Annie and that craving for her was still there.

Of course, in my mind, it's all rainbows and puppies and Jeff and Annie are doing it like bunnies. With angst.