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Caught Looking (part of the Glimpses series)

Apr 02, 2009 18:10

Title: Caught Looking (part of the Glimpses series)
Author: sinecure - My master fic list
Character/Pairings: Ten/Rose
Genre: Humor
Rating: Teen
Disclaimer: I don't own Doctor Who.
Summary: The Doctor can't stop staring.
Author's Notes: Thanks to momdaegmorgan for the beta, and her picture prompt that led to this story.

ETA: Added the picture prompt at the bottom of ( Read more... )

sinecure: dw: looking trilogy, sinecure: dw, sinecure: glimpses, sinecure, sinecure: glimpses: caught looking

Comments 14

angely78 April 3 2009, 00:31:24 UTC

"She's got a little miracle inside her. Think of all the things that go into making a baby and how much could go wrong, how much has to go right in order for it to happen at all."

I have to say that, as the mum of a little miracle of my own (who, at two, already recognizes the Doctor... not kidding), this was just gorgeous. Thanks.

sinecure April 17 2009, 21:38:27 UTC

Thank you. I adore his geeky side and really don't do it often enough, so when this fic just... flowed, I was thrilled. Glad it pleases. :)

hoperomantic April 3 2009, 02:19:22 UTC

Oh, that was very nice indeed. *grin*

sinecure April 17 2009, 21:39:11 UTC

Thanks. Geeky-Doctor is fun. :)

Love your Mal icon. Hee.

tardisblue April 3 2009, 02:45:28 UTC

That was so sweet:)

sinecure April 17 2009, 21:40:46 UTC

Thanks! I try for this side of them sometimes and it just never quite works, but for some reason, this time it did.

solitary_zero April 3 2009, 08:50:30 UTC

Hehe! The end made me laugh XD

sinecure April 17 2009, 21:41:42 UTC

Hee. Psst. There's a sequel. ;)

solitary_zero April 18 2009, 10:32:40 UTC

Ooo, awesome. I can't wait! :D

rose_cat April 3 2009, 08:55:03 UTC

Lovely! (That sounds like an interesting picture that you used for the prompt, by the way.)

I like the mpreg and "Alien" references :D

"...Think of all the things that go into making a baby and how much could go wrong, how much has to go right in order for it to happen at all."

Kind of like the Doctor's relationships...

Great last line...he'd got a little too close to the truth that time...and the zinger about Reinette was perfect. Sounds like they both got a little too close to the truth! Nice work :)

sinecure April 17 2009, 21:44:39 UTC

Thank you! (posted the pic at the bottom of the story for those interested)

Hee. Well, stands to reason, I thought, that not just the females would be the pregnant ones throughout the entire universe. And, I just... see him as picturing a baby coming out as a scary event.

Very much like his relationships, now that you mention it. :)

Hee! There's a sequel, coming soon.

rose_cat April 19 2009, 07:43:31 UTC

Sequel? SQUEEEEE!