Heavy Metal Twenty-Two
Well, here I am starting chapter twenty-two for Heavy Metal and I'm already running low on ideas. Jeez, that's pretty bad. I've got the basics of what I want in this chapter, but I need some more for effect, I believe.
1~Deathscythe's repair by Kat feat. heart to heart with Howard about Duo
2~Anubis discovers Cassie in his near vicinity
3~Zechs and Kat get into a fight about Cassie leaving to find Camui
4~Wufei debating about going after her
5~Aya calls Kat from a disclosed location to warn her about the upcoming events with Orion
Yeah...I've been thinking about some in between things that I could put in there. I need to make this chapter at least as long as my last one. I was quite happy with chapter twenty, even though there was a bit of mary sue love scenes and such in there. Anyway, here's some of my ideas for extending:
~Flashback of Kat getting the call from Cassie letting her know where she ended up
~Discussion of what Duo wants Kat to do should anything happen to him in battle
~Kat issuing a low verbal blow to Zechs that causes hurt pride and much stinging
Well, I'm not sure how this chapter is going to turn out, but we'll see. I'm slightly nervous about it. Anyway, back to working on Heavy Metal. Ciao!
1~Deathscythe's repair by Kat feat. heart to heart with Howard about Duo
2~Anubis discovers Cassie in his near vicinity
3~Zechs and Kat get into a fight about Cassie leaving to find Camui
4~Wufei debating about going after her
5~Aya calls Kat from a disclosed location to warn her about the upcoming events with Orion
Yeah...I've been thinking about some in between things that I could put in there. I need to make this chapter at least as long as my last one. I was quite happy with chapter twenty, even though there was a bit of mary sue love scenes and such in there. Anyway, here's some of my ideas for extending:
~Flashback of Kat getting the call from Cassie letting her know where she ended up
~Discussion of what Duo wants Kat to do should anything happen to him in battle
~Kat issuing a low verbal blow to Zechs that causes hurt pride and much stinging
Well, I'm not sure how this chapter is going to turn out, but we'll see. I'm slightly nervous about it. Anyway, back to working on Heavy Metal. Ciao!